Ah, these two poor mad scientists, struggling with their dueling egos! Also interesting to see how much our takes on the art/prompt differed. This was fun; I liked it a lot!
Thanks! I had fun writing it, since Linksano and Insano's dynamic is always a joy to play around with.
It was interesting to see where our details differed. I really like how you utilized more characters in your story and showed how the entire world was being affected.
Yeah, those two are going to need lots of time before they can genuinely get along without sniping or insulting each other, but the future is looking bright for them now. I felt bad putting both of them through those ordeals, but I'm glad the sweet ending helped everyone feel better.
*Hugs!* I loved this fic so much! :DD It was angsty and wonderful and I thank you for writing this.
Linksano looked at his still-trembling hand in utter perplexion, as if it had somehow betrayed him by acting of its own accord, before he was overwhelmed with a sensation that terrified him in every way imaginable. It was as if he had stepped onto an elevator that was rapidly descending, plummeting downward at faster and faster speeds into someplace cold and dark, where the air was thin and difficult to breathe.
I loved this description. It shows just how chilling and frightening the loss of control is.
“I am wrong.
Linksano couldn’t explain how or why he had come to this conclusion, but it was the only logical explanation for a very illogical set of circumstances. He was wrong. His life, his physical being, his very existence was not correct. To be or not be was the infamous question, and on that day, Linksano knew that for him, the answer was not to be.I liked this bit too. I like the fact that Linksano can internally feel the
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Linksano cut himself off when he felt a warm nuzzling sensation upon his knee. He looked down to find SOI tenderly patting down a pink Band-Aid dotted with hearts over the blood-matted wound, which was visible thanks to the tear in Linksano’s slacks. “Oh. Uh, thank you.”
“He enjoys playing doctor,” Insano informed him while SOI happily stuck a few more colorful bandages across the ends of his father’s coat.
“He wants to be like his dad. Cute,” Linksano said
SOI and his Band-Aids made me squee this entire fic! I cannot tell you how much I loved SOI in this fic.
“I think all my ideas are good ideas,” Insano quipped, provoking an eye roll from Linksano. “And in this case, it’s an especially good one, since Spoony isn’t home and I’ll be able to use as much hot water as I like!
Haha, I could imagine this part perfectly. XD I loved all of Insano’s snarky lines but this one especially.
I really liked the concept of a dimensional defibrillator! I thought that was a clever solution to the problem.
“SOI insisted he couldn’t give his patient the care he needed without a bed,” Insano dismissed. It was then that Linksano noticed the array of colorful bandages all over his arms, legs, and chest.
SOI continues to be absolutely adorable!! X3 I singled out the Band-Aid part but I loved the whole entire scene with Linksano waking up and SOI’s right up in his face, and Insano mentioning that SOI is chipper in the morning, and INSANO GIVING SOI A KISS EXCUSE ME THE CUTNESS I’M GOING TO SQUEE. <3
He seemed too flustered to finish which made Linksano smile. Perhaps all of that pain, suffering, and anguish had left a mark that for the first time he would be proud to bear.
“Shall I bring anything?”
“Chocolate chocolate chip ice cream! And if you don’t bring chocolate chocolate chip, I will make you rue the day you ever stepped foot on this planet, you second-rate scientist!”
“I’ll see you then, you narcissistic jackass.”This was the perfect ending! Linksano awkwardly trying to say ‘thank you’ without seeming pathetic or sappy, Insano
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*Hugs* I'm so happy that you enjoyed this so much! I really wanted to write something dripping with angst and Linksano suffering and those two awkwardly bonding, so I'm glad it turned out this well!
I love writing snark, so it was really fun to come up with the lines Insano and Linksano traded. I also adore SOI so I couldn't help myself from throwing him in to play with Linksano and just be adorable in general. In the future I am sure all three of them will spend much more time together bonding and eating ice cream and doing all manner of SCIENCE projects!
Thank you for drawing such a cute and inspirational picture for me to work with! I'm always glad to see more fic and art focusing on the 'Sanos and their bond! And thank you very much for always leaving such detailed and wonderful comments for me! I truly love getting to read through every one of them and knowing what you thought about each little tidbit I added to the story.
Reading amazing comments like yours really makes writing worthwhile. *Hugs*
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It was interesting to see where our details differed. I really like how you utilized more characters in your story and showed how the entire world was being affected.
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Linksano looked at his still-trembling hand in utter perplexion, as if it had somehow betrayed him by acting of its own accord, before he was overwhelmed with a sensation that terrified him in every way imaginable. It was as if he had stepped onto an elevator that was rapidly descending, plummeting downward at faster and faster speeds into someplace cold and dark, where the air was thin and difficult to breathe.
I loved this description. It shows just how chilling and frightening the loss of control is.
“I am wrong.
Linksano couldn’t explain how or why he had come to this conclusion, but it was the only logical explanation for a very illogical set of circumstances. He was wrong. His life, his physical being, his very existence was not correct. To be or not be was the infamous question, and on that day, Linksano knew that for him, the answer was not to be.I liked this bit too. I like the fact that Linksano can internally feel the ( ... )
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“He enjoys playing doctor,” Insano informed him while SOI happily stuck a few more colorful bandages across the ends of his father’s coat.
“He wants to be like his dad. Cute,” Linksano said
SOI and his Band-Aids made me squee this entire fic! I cannot tell you how much I loved SOI in this fic.
“I think all my ideas are good ideas,” Insano quipped, provoking an eye roll from Linksano. “And in this case, it’s an especially good one, since Spoony isn’t home and I’ll be able to use as much hot water as I like!
Haha, I could imagine this part perfectly. XD I loved all of Insano’s snarky lines but this one especially.
I really liked the concept of a dimensional defibrillator! I thought that was a clever solution to the problem.
“I… wrote it in between bodily spasms ( ... )
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SOI continues to be absolutely adorable!! X3 I singled out the Band-Aid part but I loved the whole entire scene with Linksano waking up and SOI’s right up in his face, and Insano mentioning that SOI is chipper in the morning, and INSANO GIVING SOI A KISS EXCUSE ME THE CUTNESS I’M GOING TO SQUEE. <3
He seemed too flustered to finish which made Linksano smile. Perhaps all of that pain, suffering, and anguish had left a mark that for the first time he would be proud to bear.
“Shall I bring anything?”
“Chocolate chocolate chip ice cream! And if you don’t bring chocolate chocolate chip, I will make you rue the day you ever stepped foot on this planet, you second-rate scientist!”
“I’ll see you then, you narcissistic jackass.”This was the perfect ending! Linksano awkwardly trying to say ‘thank you’ without seeming pathetic or sappy, Insano ( ... )
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I love writing snark, so it was really fun to come up with the lines Insano and Linksano traded. I also adore SOI so I couldn't help myself from throwing him in to play with Linksano and just be adorable in general. In the future I am sure all three of them will spend much more time together bonding and eating ice cream and doing all manner of SCIENCE projects!
Thank you for drawing such a cute and inspirational picture for me to work with! I'm always glad to see more fic and art focusing on the 'Sanos and their bond! And thank you very much for always leaving such detailed and wonderful comments for me! I truly love getting to read through every one of them and knowing what you thought about each little tidbit I added to the story.
Reading amazing comments like yours really makes writing worthwhile. *Hugs*
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