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Sins of the Father: Part 1

Apr 21, 2012 15:10

Title: Sins of the Father
Author: ocelot_l
Written for the TGWTG Big Bang
Summary: Fighting villains. Protecting the world. Gambling with fate. This has been Linkara’s life for as long as he can remember, and in all that time, he’s never questioned why he’s been dealt the role of hero. Now, it’s time for Linkara to learn the truth.
The truth about why ( Read more... )

magic gun, pollo, 90s kid, ninja style dancer, cinema snob, linksano, slash, spoony, fanfic, tgwtg, harvey, marzgurl, phelous, au, big bang, linkara, nostalgia critic, boffo

Comments 3

lizynob April 25 2012, 23:14:26 UTC

90s Kid being 90s Kid is funny. I absolutely love how you included everyone at the house and how they all try to help Linkara out with his problem.

How you described the girl inside the magic gun and how she interacts with Linkara is so sweet.

Critic is such a brat, but that’s what makes him Critic. XD And I cracked up at the dialogue between Cinema Snob and Phelous.

ocelot_l April 26 2012, 02:19:30 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like how I wrote the characters, since I love all of Linkara's team. 90s Kid is my favorite, though, so I always try hard to capture his voice.

I also love that poor, sad little girl a lot, and I like to imagine she's at peace because she has Linkara to visit her and talk to her from time to time.

Heh, yeah, Critic is so much fun to write when you make him suffer a little. I also love writing Snob and Phelous interacting, so I just had to have them around to snark at everything.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! :)

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ocelot_l April 27 2012, 21:06:24 UTC

Aw thanks so much! <3 I'm glad you're enjoying it now that your schedule has cleared up!

Yes, 90s Kid is so much fun to write. I just love him so much.

Poor Linkara. He has to suffer through a lot until he can find his ending. This fandom sure does love its woobies, myself included, lol.