[The Dirty Business Chronicles] [In Due Time] [Drinking]

Dec 17, 2006 22:59

Title: In Due Time
Universe: The Dirty Business Chronicles
Characters: Ganymede, mentions of an eventual character
Word Count: 973
Rating: PG-13ish
Summary: There’s a reason Ganymede's mind remains unexamined.
Notes: I suppose someone out there could find this disturbing. Ganymede is on location at the MoMA when she suddenly passes out and begins ( Read more... )

outdated: falling, mimsymomerath, submission

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esotaria December 18 2006, 04:07:10 UTC
Cut text didn't work! x3;;;

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nellasaur December 18 2006, 05:07:40 UTC
This was very cool. Your pieces are always so atmospheric, and this is certainly no exception. I think I'm a little afraid of the new character.

I did notice a couple technical errors--a slash where there should be a period ("She had to forcibly stop herself from retching/") and a "you" where it looks like there should be a "your" ("I'm sure you want to leave you mind before you sustain any further injuries.").

I liked this very much, and am looking forward to your next submission!

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