Fic: OK Computer (Jared/Misha, NC-17)

[obstinatrix]

Author: obstinatrix
Written for: thehighwaywoman for spn_j2_xmas
Title: OK Computer
Pairing: Jared/Misha
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,113
Summary/Notes: thehighwaywoman delighted me altogether too much with all the unusual pairings she requested. I've been kind of boggled for a while by the lack of Jared/Misha, so even after I'd written the main piece for the exchange, I kept looking at her prompts

Comments

[smutjunkie]

GIRL.

Why is it that my favorite part was just the way that Misha was dicking with Jared?

And your hyperactive drunk!Jared voice is just completely spot on. You completely get the sense that on one level his brain is firing a thousand thoughts a second but up here on the real, human interaction level he's running at least three minutes slow.

[obstinatrix]

THAT IS TOTALLY MY FAVOURITE PART OF THE WHOLE THING, TOO.

And I'm so pleased you liked the narrative voice, because yeah, I was kind of concerned about that! Thank you bb.

[thehighwaywoman]

(with apologies for comment!jumping)

You completely get the sense that on one level his brain is firing a thousand thoughts a second but up here on the real, human interaction level he's running at least three minutes slow.

THIS. This is exactly right, and you said it way better than I could. :D

[copper_on_mars]

*is reduced to a shuddering incoherent mess*

Love everything about it, but most of all, Jared's inability to talk. Just, GUH. Thank you for sharing this!!!

[obstinatrix]

:DDDDDDDD

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! So glad you liked!

[hiza_chan]

Jesus CHRIST that was the hottest porn I have read in a VERY long time. Also, at the way he yells out “Shit!” like he’s just seen a bird on direct dive-bomb course for a plate of glass this strikes me as very Jared. I like it.

[obstinatrix]

:DDDDDDDD Thank you! I'm quite fond of that line, myself. ;) ♥

[fromyourashes]

AERSD.SFD. GOODNESS.

[obstinatrix]

:D Thank you!

[u2angel]

Oh hell yes! This is exactly what I've been craving. So damn hot!

Excuse me while I worship at your feet a little :D

[obstinatrix]

*grins* Thank you! So glad you liked!