[The Beatles] Fic: Backwards Traveller [9/?], John/Paul (NC-17)

[obstinatrix]

Title: Backwards Traveller
Rating: NC-17 (this chapter)
Pairing: John/Paul
Authors: tini_91 and obstinatrix
Summary/Notes: Fair warning, this chapter is unadulterated smut. :)

Comments

[bbgirlz]

This was just perfect. There is no other word to describe it.

I love that they're trying to go slow, or at least as slow as two horney teenagers can go. You have a gift to make me smile with your writing :).

his blood thump excitedly, thinking of it, John's mark in the hollow of his throat. Walking around with John's lovebite on him, as if John had claimed him.
Paul couldn't remember the last time a kiss had felt like this.

Well, kill me if this wasn't hot. You could have only posted those lines and I'd be just as happy. Wonderful.

John's broad chest the perfect pillow for Paul's head. Paul felt good like this. He felt loved.

See, the thing is that I read this fic and it's like I go back in time and start feeling like a teenager again, with all the squee and awww and fangirly noises you can imagine. And I love it. I really love that feeling :)

[obstinatrix]

Your comments are always so lovely. :) Thank you so much!

[obstinatrix]

Oh, I wish I had a shred of artistic talent too. :) Thank you!

[blackbirdfan]

What a glorious way to end my week. I adore how they are just doing it, not thinking too much about it, experimenting and then pulling back.

Can't wait to see what ideas they get on the seedy side of town. :)

[obstinatrix]

Hahaaa, wait and see. xD

[yes_2day]

Ok, now you're talking...

I think it was cute that they left their underwear on. Sounds like what people - especially very young people - do when they're making love for the first time.

[obstinatrix]

Aw, I love writing about very young John and Paul. :) Thank you!

[lookrealmuggles]

I am always so excited when you update this story because I've fallen in love with it. The writing is incredible - how well y'all write about contrasting emotions and establish the tone of the scene: urgent yet hesitant, excited yet nervous. It's just convey so well how much both boys are so excited by the new steps in their relationship and even when a sense of urgency kicks in, you still feel the underlying sense of nerves that holds them back. I feel like displaying such different extremes is really difficult, but y'all have done it. I know I've already said this, but I also love the progression. It seems so realistic to me, especially as two boys in the time period are trying something illegal and frowned upon. It's in-keeping with how I think any sexual situations would go between the two.

Can't wait to read the next update!

[obstinatrix]

Thank you so much, what a lovely thing to say!