Comments | obstinatrix: Ficlets: Emmys, 1968 (PG-13); Remember (R)

obstinatrix

Ficlets: Emmys, 1968 (PG-13); Remember (R)

Sep 27, 2009 18:56

Ficlet offload!

Title: Remember
Rating: R
Pairing: Shatnoy
Disclaimer: Lies
Warning: BDSM
Notes: Tiny misplaced commentfic from the RPF general kinkmeme. See warning. I...don't like this much.

( The more I want you to remember something, the more likely you are to have forgotten it. )

porn, rps, fluff, shatner, nimoy, bdsm, shatnoy, fic, crack, slash

Comments 15

tiny_increments September 27 2009, 19:45:44 UTC

"I don't care about best actor. We all know who's the best actor. And I wasn't nominated. So everyone else can just suck it up, and I hope the renegade who walks off with the Emmy knows he stole it from me, goddammit."
TRUFAX.

And Len rationing Bill's popcorn? TOO CUTE!

obstinatrix September 27 2009, 21:40:04 UTC

;) What can I say? The prompt SPOKE TO ME.

indiwise September 27 2009, 21:14:05 UTC

The first was just enough. Just enough to whet the imagination. The second? Cute as hell. Good stuff. As always!

obstinatrix September 27 2009, 21:40:24 UTC

*grins* I'm spamming a bit, at the moment, I know, so thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked them!

sookail September 27 2009, 21:36:03 UTC

The first one? Really, really well-written. Beautiful, minimalistic just enough and strangely vivid. Love it when I come across a fic, drabble, well, anything that paints a picture/moment/situation so real that the reader holds her breath and can practically *see it*. Well, this *so* is one of those, and I very much hope you`ll use the style again some time in the future.

The second was awfully cute and quite terribly IC *ggg*. The "don`t get crumbs in the lube!" & "I don't care about best actor. We all know who's the best actor. And I wasn't nominated." paragraphs are especially made of IC funny.*13-y/o fangirl inside starts madly giggling again*

obstinatrix September 27 2009, 21:41:21 UTC

Thank you so much for your comments on the first one - I really wasn't sure about it at all, frankly, so that's really nice to hear.

And yeahhhhhh - that's my favourite line in the second one, too. Oh, Bill. ;)

mizubyte September 27 2009, 21:46:21 UTC

maybe i'm weird but i LOVED the first one. (of course we've already talked about my kinks with Len and damn, dominating!len is so totally one of them....)

and the second one... glee!! haha oh poor boys. they're adorable

obstinatrix September 27 2009, 21:52:04 UTC

I love dom!Len too! I was just very afraid he hadn't come across well there, so I'm glad you liked.

screamlet September 28 2009, 00:17:25 UTC

askdjhf I just noticed "I'm gonna spill the LEONARD" kajhsdjlhas HAHAHAHA OH, INDEED, MUCH SPILLING TONIGHT. bom chika etc.

As for the first one, I agree with someone above about how it's so vivid I was holding my breath the whole time? It's really different from everything else you do which, as dark as it gets, always has some kind of glimmer of light in it, too? I found Leonard rather terrifying in it, which is saying something! MISSION ACCOMPLISHED. ♥ ♥ ♥

obstinatrix September 28 2009, 00:23:53 UTC

Yeah, Leonard is a bit terrifying in it, isn't he? :P I'm glad you liked it, though. It's pretty damn dark, and as you say, I do usually have some glimmer of light in my stuff, and this one there just - isn't.

BUT THE SECOND FIC IS FLUFF, SO, IT MAKES IT ALL BETTER.