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_mournthewicked December 21 2011, 19:39:30 UTC
hnnnnnnngh marvelous and sexy. and you know you have to write the threesome, right? i mean, you have to.

that's right. i take all you have to offer and then i demand MORE.

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obstinatrix December 28 2011, 11:55:19 UTC
:DD I love you for it, sweetness!

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kurenai24 December 21 2011, 20:45:10 UTC
Wow, I thought I couldn't love Mishalecki more until I read this fic, It had everything I love about Mishalecki: dominating Misha, some Jared hair play, submisive Jared.

This fic is just beautiful.

I would love to see a companion fic to this with it focusing on the effects of Jared wearing his red panties around Misha or a sequal to this fic with a threesome. *breathes* I shall save this fic, because I know, I'll be reading it again.

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obstinatrix December 28 2011, 11:55:44 UTC
:D Thanks so much! I feel like a threesome sequel is sort of inevitable now. <.< >.>

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scarletscarlet December 21 2011, 23:22:29 UTC
Mmm, gorgeous fun. This kinda feels like part of a larger story - not in that it feels unfinished, because it doesn't at all - but in the way the story you've chosen here is happening in the midst of the ongoing struggle. Love that, actually. Not saying I'd be averse should you want to play with these guys more. Not at ALL :D. But it's nice to be given a piece, sometimes, because it leaves one with plenty of room to daydream, and plenty of tantalising threads to follow forward or backward :).

And ;lkjasdlk over the threesome tease. And the hero-at-the-villain's-mercy thing of it (and the hint that the idea is not unwelcome), nrgh.

I love the whole white clothes/glass throne/giant aquarium cool camp villainy of the setting. Gorgeous to picture. Aaaand, yes, the Jared-objectification (h'ray!) works beautifully with that setting. Including, yum, the bare feet. Padding around like a big cat. He has such nice feet. Should be barefoot in show more often, dammit (I swear, I have no foot fetish! His are just nice).

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obstinatrix December 28 2011, 11:56:46 UTC
:D Thanks so much! It was really the setting that came to me first; I knew I wanted to write something just as an excuse to use the mental images I had of this futuristic palace as imagined by people in the 1960s, you know -- kinda Mission Impossible. And I feel like a threesome sequel is sort of inevitable now. <.< >.>

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sgmajorshipper December 22 2011, 00:25:23 UTC
Waaaaaay better than a porny Syfy version. Holy hell. *_____*

I have to say, and I mean this as an utter compliment; you write porn like nobody else. And it is glorious.

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obstinatrix December 28 2011, 11:57:03 UTC
:DD Thanks so much!

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rowdy_missus December 22 2011, 00:55:18 UTC
Jaysus Christ, this was spectacular. Needy!subby!Bottom!Jared is the bestestestest of all the bottoms in my opinion! Fantastic! I adored the argument over the stick insects, it was ludicrously ridiculous and awesome.

Is it wrong that I'm already imagining the sequel wherein Jared and Misha cunningly con Jensen into a bed with them/ With spitroasts and things? Ah well, I'll just repeat the Fan Girl's motto: IF IT'S WRONG, THEN I DON'T WANT TO BE RIGHT.

Please write more? I could never not love this!

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obstinatrix December 28 2011, 11:57:31 UTC
:D Thanks so much bb! I feel like a threesome sequel is sort of inevitable now. <.< >.>

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