Your dialogue! god, I love it. Also, LOVE reading how gorgeous Jared is and how insane they're for each other...the bath scene is beautiful and wonderful and hotter than it has any right to be! Oh man, I LOVE these boys.
"Gonna get in it with me?" Jensen's jaw is right there, smooth and well-cut, and Jared can't help but run his tongue along it, up into the soft place behind Jensen's ear that makes his breath come quick, as it does even now, Jensen hissing a breath and tightening his grip on Jared. HOLY SHIT Jared! ILLEGAL! Has to be!
Uh, you made me dsjnhjadflj with the foot thing and...not usually my thing but, HOLY HELL.
Reading this fic in 2016 and I love it so much I wish I had found it earlier, I feel deprived of such an amazing story with amazing amazing characterisation of every single person. I love smut and fluff but angst is my everything, can't wait to read on. Hope you don't find it weird that I'm commenting on something you wrote in 2011 :)
wants to sink under the water with him and never come back up, and that's -- that is probably not good. What's worse is that he doesn't even care
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HOLY SHIT Jared! ILLEGAL! Has to be!
Uh, you made me dsjnhjadflj with the foot thing and...not usually my thing but, HOLY HELL.
and, just...~ALL THE THINGS~ Just...! <3
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wants to sink under the water with him and never come back up, and that's -- that is probably not good. What's worse is that he doesn't even care
Oh my god this is beautiful.
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