Chapter 17 - Wandering amidst a whirl of stormy emotions.

Jan 24, 2010 03:43



Please, please, please, don’t be gone…

Yoochun felt each jolting step tremor through his pumping legs, his throbbing heart pounding a steady boom boom boom within his tightened chest, as he rushed towards a sliver of wavering light slicing past a slit between the grand double doors to fall upon the darkened oak flooring. The hush that silenced the ( Read more... )

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obsidianinks January 23 2010, 19:44:02 UTC
spot for ekin_hardy, ting5 and succexytop!! (^_^)

yayy~ i finished it! i hope you guys like this one... *facepalms* i havent been writing yoosu smut for some time, or any smut for the matter, and this is like the first real smut in the chapter, so please dont kill me~!! *shields self* im still new at writing smut so i apologise if you guys, *twiddles thumb* ya know, find it inadequate..

ahhh! im sorry theres like no yunjae love here, i realised that yoosu was so long that it could be considered as a full chapter.. so ill post all yunjae love at next chappie! ^^ gah, im saying sorry alot *bows*

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ekin_hardy January 23 2010, 20:36:31 UTC
Muahahahaha...I'm satisfied...LOL

What can be more romantic and HOT than a make-up sex on fields in public with thunders surrounding them~~~

Muahahaha..I'm happy...

The yoosu in this is LOOOVVEEE...(not just bcoz of the smut although its a BONUS)

but bcoz their relationship sometimes feels so calm n peace behind both of their fiery nature...

and sometimes when it comes to their relationship itself they can turn into insecure beings,,scared of what will happen to each other and losing each other

and I love all of it that made up Yoosu...

and

OWH JAE~~~~!!!!! *braced myself for next chapter as u have warned me*

Tanx for updating dear although with ur exams n all~~~ Luv ya~~~

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obsidianinks January 26 2010, 12:13:44 UTC
kukuku~! im glad you enjoyed it!! ^^ sorry for the late reply.. been pretty busy with school and on top of that, had a major asthma attack at 5 in the morn which woke me up.. so yeah been feeling pretty down.. but i think im recovering now so i can continue the story soon.. ^^ i didnt realise the yoosu would be so long until i had to reserve it into one whole chapter.. yunjae love will be next chap... (^_^) im glad you liked the smuttiness... ehhehehe *slaps self* im so embaressed...

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ting5 January 24 2010, 03:59:11 UTC
Woots ^^ Yoosu filled chapter makes me happy *twirling excitedly*

Amidst all their past, insecurities and their nature..their love time and time again shows how strong it is and how they exist as one..LOL I think I dont nake sense but anyway Yoosu makes me 8D

I'm worried abt Jae though..will wait to find out by next chap o.O will be wary

Thanx for the update *hugs*

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obsidianinks January 23 2010, 19:46:30 UTC
spot for youinmyjumpsuit, gu2duck, jeshara and dilovesyunjae ^^

ahh, yoosu smut scene.. *bows in apology*
i feel like i muddled it up~ and does it seem too kinky that they are doing it in a park, a public area?? even though its in the woods, but its still outdoors.. ok, im babbling hehe, but i hope you guys like it!! ^^ sorry for no yunjaeness here.. *runs away*

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obsidianinks January 26 2010, 12:17:05 UTC
heheheh *hands you a tissue*

lol im sure they would be well aware of someone peeking at them... chunnie will protect suie~ (^_^) im glad you enjoyed it *huggles*

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hoshi14 January 23 2010, 21:24:35 UTC
Ahh, did Yoochun almost find Jaejoong? To bad he didn't know what was happening.
Junsu is fine so that is good. I am glad he did not leave for a more serious reason.

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obsidianinks January 26 2010, 12:21:07 UTC
^^ thks for commenting dearie~ i always manage to see you comment for every chappie and for that i thank you~ *huggles* ill save you a spot next chap (^_^)

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obsidianinks January 26 2010, 12:22:24 UTC
^^ more yunjae love coming next chappie.. its just that i didnt know yoosu would last for so long... i didnt mean to~ *facepalms* so i kinda had to split the chap into two chapters.. so it'll be mostly yunjae next chap :)

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yo0chun_sshi January 24 2010, 02:06:53 UTC
now after reading from chapter 12-17...THAT WAS SO LONG.
i read from 8-10am. wew! but it was worth it!!!! yunjae's closeness was so much loved!!! and the sweet and romantic yoosu..aigooo!!! when they were making love *gigles* kyaaa!!!
i hope that they'll find jae soon! thanks for the long chapters you wrote!!! HWAITING~

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obsidianinks January 26 2010, 12:23:51 UTC
hahahaha im glad you enjoyed yoosu smut *cough cough* (^_^)

its no problem, im just glad that i can let you guys read my story.. im eternally grateful that you seem to enjoy my story.. it gives me courage~ *huggles*

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