Comments | obsidian179: Parallax chapter 2

obsidian179

Parallax chapter 2 - (6/28/2008)

Jun 28, 2008 13:28

As long as it's been, some of you may have forgotten about this. Rest assured, though, that I haven't!

Also, this is only the first part of chapter two. I would have waited until the whole thing was done, but I decided that you'd all waited long enough already as it was. ;) Enjoy!

( I was starting to wonder if I should call the police and report a murder for a minute there. )

parallax, debs, viola/olivia, she's the man, debs fic, olivia/viola fic

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obsidian179 June 29 2008, 20:13:58 UTC

What? Resolve the drama now? When we're only part way through chapter two? Oh, no, no, no, no, no. ;) Heck, her little love triangle could turn into a love hexagon if she isn't careful. *lol* (All the more drama for you to enjoy, no?)

Thank you. ^_^

anonymous June 30 2008, 11:56:46 UTC

So Olivia still can't make a decision - and now she'll have even more options?

Well, as long as Olivia and Viola make it in the end I'll be happy.

If, however, Viola is going to continue to be indecisive and too free in her affections, I think that Olivia should play the field too. It doesn't seem fair that Olivia is the only one pining away and crying her eyes out. Let Viola get a little jealous of the attention Olivia gets; let Viola cry over Olivia a bit; let Viola realize that if she doesn't get her act together, she may loose Olivia all together.

anonymous June 30 2008, 11:57:40 UTC

I meant Viola still can't make a decision - not Olivia.

obsidian179 June 30 2008, 15:38:07 UTC

Well, to be fair, Viola hasn't really done anything, yet. (And technically, even being with Olivia is cheating on her boyfriend. Funny how nobody seems to mind that part, isn't it? *lol*) She's just... very confused, I think. ^_^

anonymous June 30 2008, 20:26:25 UTC

That's a good point about Viola cheating on Duke, and normally, even if I like the new couple (O/V in this case), I still feel kind of bad for the one left behind. I think the reason why the earlier poster glossed over that was because the Duke/Viola realtionship never made sense (at what point did we see Duke developing those feelings for Viola as Sebastion?).

But I have to agree with my fellow Anonymous, that it would be unfair for Olivia to do all the pining and the crying. She's got to remember that she was the hottest and most sought after girl in Illyria. If Viola can't appreciate her, let her have some fun with other women - let Viola get jealous for once.

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anonymous July 3 2008, 01:16:50 UTC

Welcome back!

More than a month gone and then 2 updates in as many weeks.

Looking forward to more olivia/Viola and Lucy/Amy action.

obsidian179 July 3 2008, 05:57:31 UTC

Thank you. ^_^ (And I personally think I should be updating a lot more often then that, but the muse doesn't seem to agree, so... *shrugs* The updates - including part 2 of this one - will just have to come when they come.)

Viola/Olivia? Oh, you betcha! Lucy and Amy, however, have driven off into the sunset (so to speak) to enjoy their lives together. But don't worry, you won't be lacking for femslash in this story... and just wait until you meet all the characters. ;)

demoka August 31 2009, 12:18:57 UTC

XP Cameron/River as another person, okay, gonna need to get my head around that one. XP Well, her love for order would be relevant to Cam...

but anyways *squee!* this is really an awesome fic! It's so fun and oooh, is Cynthia gonna be a problem, cause I really do root for Olivia/Viola.

The direction this is going is awesome too! But I wonder if we meet up with Lucy & Amy and the other DEBS?

obsidian179 August 31 2009, 12:37:57 UTC

Oh, Jess might get to do some ass-kicking later on in the story... but I'm not telling. ^_^

Glad you're still enjoying it.