sherlock bbc fic: john's lucky pants [sh/jw; rated 16; humour] FYJFF Red Pants Contest

Sep 23, 2012 11:11

Written for the FYJFF Red Pants Contest on Tumblr

Title: John's Lucky Pants
Author: obsessionality
Rating: NC-16
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Words: 4411
Summary: Sherlock is curious. Sherlock is a scientist. Sherlock has no boundaries. Sherlock is also a little bit like a teenage girl. And John has lucky pants. Insanity ensues.
Warnings: None. This is a humorous, fluffy fic ( Read more... )

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sunny_rainfall September 23 2012, 19:23:31 UTC
Awwwwww so awesome

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obsessionality September 24 2012, 01:22:15 UTC
Hee! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

xx

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jouse September 24 2012, 00:17:16 UTC
Positively adorable and hilarious. Just Lovely.

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obsessionality September 24 2012, 01:24:42 UTC
I'm glad you like it! Thank you!

xx

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utterlysorbine September 29 2012, 14:10:21 UTC
AAARGH. This is GORGEOUS. I love your Sherlock voice, it's perfect: "and pulled him closer, until they were breathing the same air (and the thought sent shivers down Sherlock’s spine)"

“perhaps they’re my lucky pants too.” - umph. I'm a sucker for a good last line. Lovely, thank you!

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obsessionality September 29 2012, 14:15:03 UTC
*squishes* THANK YOU SO MUCH. omg I'm glad it worked, and I'm glad you liked it, and I'm even more glad that you took the time to tell me!

Thanks so much! And Yeah, I was hoping for a last good line. I might have spent more time on it than I did on the rest of the fic combined... *facepalm*

xx
LM

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utterlysorbine September 29 2012, 14:19:35 UTC
I was absolutely exceptional. And you really do have BBC Sherlock's voice down pat - I think some people can over-emphasise his darkness or his childishness, his genius or his lack of self-awareness, but you played it perfectly.

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rifleman_s September 30 2012, 19:06:59 UTC
"...but all he knew was that if Mycroft disapproved, John would approve. It didn’t always work, but it did, mostly, and that’s what counted."

*chorte* That's made my Sunday night!!

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obsessionality September 30 2012, 23:50:54 UTC
*giggle* I'm glad! Thanks for letting me know!

xx
Lady Merlin

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