Comments | obscureddark: we planted flowers of warning (Black Swan, Nina/Lily, PG-13)

aphrodite_mine in obscureddark

we planted flowers of warning (Black Swan, Nina/Lily, PG-13)

Jan 10, 2011 12:47

nataixoco requested
Black Swan, Nina/Lily, if i could have a second skin, i'd probably dress up in you
on page 6 of the girlslash comment ficathon

740ish words

warning for [minor spoilers, highlight to reveal] weight obsession, eating disorder, and non-erotic peeing, which could totally be squicky for people

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blackswan:ninasayers, 2011, fic:femslash, blackswan:nina/lily, blackswan, pg-13

Comments 8

st_aurafina January 11 2011, 11:02:08 UTC

I haven't seen Black Swan, but this is amazingly intense.

therealval January 15 2011, 06:46:52 UTC

Wow such a good way or portraying the relationship! Great job.

anissa7118 February 6 2011, 21:47:06 UTC

*jaw drops*

Ok, if I keep commenting, I am gonna sound like a rabid fangirl. But I am so damn glad I went looking for inspiration today. Kudos to you.

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anissa7118 February 7 2011, 05:50:19 UTC

*blushes* Aww, I'm glad I could make your day a little better. It may also help to know that I have recommended your story over at blackswanfic. I seem to be the only one recommending over there, but it might get some more exposure. Who knows. You certainly deserve plenty of applause for this.

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dollsome February 20 2011, 06:30:00 UTC

Oh, gosh, this is exquisite. Just awesome.

whirligigged February 21 2011, 18:30:41 UTC

Uh, oh my God. I have wanted something about Black Swan like this since I left the theatre.

And for the briefest of moments, out of the corner of her eye, Nina can see up Lily's skirt. She doesn't look away; her eyes cast downward in the mirror, her throat working silently.
This hit me hard, somehow. The bit after, the numbers don't surface, it made Nina just human again for a moment.