"Tarnished" (PG; Victor, Claire)

May 18, 2009 16:38

Title: Tarnished
Author: obiwahn
Pairing/Characters: Victor, Claire (hints of Victor/Sierra & Claire/Topher)
Rating: PG
Warnings: Bleak, possibly political
Spoilers: Through Omega
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Joss. Just playing.
Word Count: 400
A/N: Written for dollhousefics Challenge 013: Self.
X-Posted to dollhousetales , blank_dolls , and dollhouseflash .

This didn't come out quite as I'd hoped, but ( Read more... )

victor, fanfiction, dollhousefics, dollhouse, claire saunders

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restlessme May 19 2009, 00:22:21 UTC
This was wonderful.

Love how you showed the differences between Victor and Claire.
He experiences life outside the dollhouse with his scars and she's too afraid to really go outside.

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obiwahn May 19 2009, 00:24:35 UTC
Thanks so much :) My heart breaks for both of them.

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obiwahn May 19 2009, 02:08:34 UTC
Thank you! *hugs*

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demonqueen666 May 19 2009, 01:46:17 UTC
Lovely job. Very evocative and true to both their characters.

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obiwahn May 19 2009, 02:10:24 UTC
Thanks muchly :) I like your icon!

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faeriesfolly May 19 2009, 01:55:10 UTC
I don't usually read fic, but there are times that the subject nudges me to check things out. This was really lovely.

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obiwahn May 19 2009, 02:09:43 UTC
Aww thanks. That's so sweet :D Glad you enjoyed.

(I just realized I am sorely in need of a Victor icon!)

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snowpuppies May 20 2009, 06:34:39 UTC
Nice!

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