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A Place in Heaven - Part Ten

Mar 29, 2009 00:02

Title: A Place in Heaven (Part Ten)
Fandom: Angel
Characters: Wesley/Faith
Prompt: 24: Agony (for ships50 - view table)
Word Count: 1,115
Rating: PG (Eventually R)
Warnings/Spoilers: Through Time Bomb
Summary: Faith must help Wesley send Illyria back to the deeper well before she destroys the world.
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Comments 6

mister_pointy99 March 29 2009, 16:21:53 UTC

Ah! The suspence is a killer!

I sooo love Wes/Faith dynamic you write. The UST is so thick you can cut it with a knife. And, OTOH, they're true partners, the "lets-go-save-the-world" type. Awesome chapter.

obiwahn March 29 2009, 19:43:03 UTC

The UST is so thick you can cut it with a knife.

Hehe. Just wait for the next chapter!

And, OTOH, they're true partners, the "lets-go-save-the-world" type.

Oh yes. Ever since season 4 I've seen them this way. They worked together so beautifully, I wish that we could have seen more demon-hunting adventures. They also would never let the other give up or feel sorry for themselves. There's that "tough love" aspect there, definitely.

Awesome chapter.

Thanks! :D

all_choseny March 29 2009, 17:36:48 UTC

A few years ago she couldn’t have cared less whether or not she lived or died. She would have welcomed death like an old lover, and gladly wrapped herself in its cold embrace.

That line was beautiful. Great chapter. More please!

obiwahn March 29 2009, 19:45:03 UTC

Thanks! I was worried that it was too poetic for describing Faith, haha. But I like to write her as more complex, and having grown a lot since the last time we saw her on BtVS, which I think she would have.

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all_choseny March 29 2009, 22:25:48 UTC

Hmm, I just came back to read this chapter. Still great! But I have to disagree, Drift. I think it moves the story along...the story is slower-moving, but that's ok, because there is build up.

obiwahn March 29 2009, 23:20:49 UTC

Thanks for the compliments and criticism :)

Yes, things have been moving slowly, but believe me, the s$%t is about to hit the fan ;) This fic is a new style of writing for me...writing third person but from the POV of one chara (Faith in this case). Glad you are enjoying her characterization at the very least!