Undone

[obiwahn]

Title: Undone
Prompt: Bare - for open_on_sunday
Characters: Wesley/Faith
Word Count: 100
Rating: R
Warnings/Spoilers: Sexual Situations

Comments

[damalur]

Oo, hot! I love the detail about her hair and the sort of isolated, "we only have this moment" feel. It's so them.

[obiwahn]

Thank you :-D I wrote this rather fast, so I was hoping it's ok. I'm still somewhat new to drabbles...only been doing them for about a month now. I feel like they are hit or miss. I just noticed that I made a rhyme with the hair/prayer, haha. Don't know how I feel about that.

I thought this might get me jazzed about writing the next chapter of my WIP :-P

[damalur]

Drabbles are tough; I usually find myself going over the word count, and I'm never able to cut things back to 100 words. Ah, well.

Do you have a link to your WIP? I must have missed it somehow, and now I'm intrigued and excited! :D

[obiwahn]

They really are tough! I feel like this is a bit choppy as a result of cutting some stuff out. Ah, well indeed.

Yay! Of course, I'll link ya there, haha. It's a slow build up, as it takes place in an alternate season 5 after Fred's death...but I am determined to get those crazy kids together eventually!

Here you go:

A Place in Heaven

[mister_pointy99]

Mmmm... yummy. And truly poetic.

[obiwahn]

Thank you :-P I felt the need for some faithsley smut. Hehe.

[mistress_britt]

GUH

That was short, delicious and gorgeous.

[obiwahn]

Thank you :-) Glad you enjoyed.

[dreamincolor]

Gorgeous.

"When he came he whispered her name like a prayer.."

Talk about 100 words that pack a punch, hon. -purr- So very sexy.

You'll turn me into a Faith/Wes shipper, yet!

[obiwahn]

Hee. Thanks hun, coming from you (an awesome writer!) that means a lot!

You'll turn me into a Faith/Wes shipper, yet!Buhahaha. My evil plan is working

[dreamincolor]

Hee. Thanks hun, coming from you (an awesome writer!) that means a lot!

Aw, shucks.

There are a lot of Wes/Faith shippers that tend to demonize Lilah in their fanfics and that really turns me off.

Hmm..that does strike me as strange. But I guess the competition (at least in people's minds) would make sense. Faith and Lilah are both powerful, get-what-they-want kind of women, with a slightly evil, if not morally ambiguous streak to boot. Not to mention they're both unbelievably sexy. So, I can see how that might put them at odds in peoples minds, especially for Wesley's affections. But, for people like me and you, that probably just means we fall in love with the same qualities in both of them. And then pair them with Wesley. -purr-

That is cool, though. I'd never thought about it that way, but you're right, there was definitely a transition from Wesley's energies being put into Lilah, to being put into Faith..

Now take that last sentence, say it out loud, and try not to laugh. You bad, perverted girl. :P

[obiwahn]

But, for people like me and you, that probably just means we fall in love with the same qualities in both of them. And then pair them with Wesley. -purr-

Mmmmm...Yes. Wesley and us, we love our bad girls ;-)

there was definitely a transition from Wesley's energies being put into Lilah, to being put into Faith..

Now take that last sentence, say it out loud, and try not to laugh. You bad, perverted girl. :P

Heehee! You're the pervy one! Ok, ok, I am too. Cause that sentence was diiirrrrrty!

[karahalliwell]

Short and hot. I think the situation really fits this pairing, great fic.

[obiwahn]

thank you :-)