Comments | obeetaybee: FIC: (SPN) Ten Million Miles

obeetaybee

May 01, 2007 01:09

Ten Million Miles
100 words
John/Mary
For 100_ghosts Achilles Heel prompt ( Read more... )

Comments 7

sarlev_vanisa May 1 2007, 05:35:45 UTC

oh wow.

eerie. Really good.

obeetaybee May 2 2007, 17:15:49 UTC

Thank you so much!

dotfic May 2 2007, 00:53:27 UTC

The first line stands out as particularly amazing. :)

This is Dark, and lovely and memorable, and I love the backstory you came up with here.

obeetaybee May 2 2007, 17:15:27 UTC

Aw, thanks, Dot. Queen of the first lines, that's me. It's the lines after that I'm seeming to have problems with lately.

hkath May 2 2007, 02:08:09 UTC

Wow, took me a minute to figure out what was going on, but I love the idea. It's so much darker than we usually see!

obeetaybee May 2 2007, 17:14:23 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm not so good with the sunshine and roses, but I'm glad you liked it!

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obeetaybee May 7 2007, 12:21:35 UTC

Thank you so much, Ginger! *smooch*