it's sweet the taste this bit of love

[obeetaybee]

Title: it's sweet the taste this bit of love
Pairing: girl!Sam/Dean
Rating: PG-R ish
Warnings: Violence, incest
Notes: Thank you so much to melange1 for the quick and dirty beta. Written for picfor1000. Mine's here. Title from Mirah’s Bones and Skin

feedback would be awesome.

Comments

[who_favor_fire]

This, right here, is perfection. I love how raw and painful it is.

[obeetaybee]

Thank you so much, sweets! There's just something so raw about this pair of characters, something I just can't seem to get enough of.

[who_favor_fire]

Well I can't get enough of your girl!Sam/Dean. No one writes it quite as beautifully as you do.

[obeetaybee]

Thank you, love! You just totally made my night. ♥

[venacavaa]

Genius. Brilliant. I'm really rather speechless right now, and don't know how to adequately or eloquently say how incredible this is.

I just don't even know how I'm supposed to feel about this. A little frightened by the intensity of their fighting and arguing and everything and then it's just a rush of other random things like shock.

And goodness, the language of this fic, like the way you write is so wonderful, the sentence structure and some of the verbs you use that I would've never considered using in that context and the dialogue, it's so sharp and it really packs a punch.

This is where I would quote the best parts and examples of this, but I can't pick any small number and I'd be copying and pasting the majority of this. Adding to my fic rec list for 2010, and just leaving this tab open to reread it again and again.

[obeetaybee]

Oh, my! Thank you so much for the awesome comment! I think every time we put something forth, we wish for feedback just like this. I'm glad it resonated somewhere in you, these characters are ones I just can't seem to get enough of.

[little_missmimi]

This is perfect. I love the fighting and the pacing and the touches of angst. <3

[obeetaybee]

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. These characters are so raw and I can't seem to get enough of them!

[juleet]

Agh! So good it hurts. -.-

The HAWT! THE HAWT!

I wouldn't have minded if there was an extra paragraph or ten, of more Dean/Sam, but I have a very good imagination. LOL

[obeetaybee]

Thank you, bb! I love these two characters in all their fucked up glory so, so much.

[lucklessforhim]

Girl!Sam/Dean is my new guilty pleasure. This was really great. I felt like I could see the scene playing out in front of me. I'd SO love to know what happens next...

[obeetaybee]

While I don't know what happens exactly next I can tell you this happened soon after and followed by this.

Holy crap, does this mean I got a 'verse?

Thanks for reading, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ♥

[lucklessforhim]

Oooooh! *scampers off to read and leave comments* :D

[who_favor_fire]

Would it be totally creepy for me to pop in here and say something (in a somewhat diabolical voice) along the lines of MUAHAHA YOU'RE SLOWLY GIVING INTO DEAN/SAM!