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[nyxty]

Title: Try and Act Like a Normal Person
Author: Nyxty
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sirius takes Remus on their first, and last, date.
Word count: 3,462
Disclaimer: Not mine!!

James is lying on what used to be Sirius’s bed. He made a valley for himself in between The Mountain of Ugly Trousers and The Hill of Unflattering Shirts. He watches, with

Comments

[cherryoranges]

Aww that was so wonderfully right and I wouldn't be surprised if it actually happened. I had a big, goofy grin on my face the entire time. And because you wrote such a wonderful story, and because I like the word, I'm giving you kudos!

[nyxty]

Yea, kudos!! Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it. And much love for your icon!!

[spacefragments]

haha, I like this. v. cute and funny. I love Sirius and his disgusting stories/habits/dirty clothes/etc. I agree that the date thing was not really necessary, but he was so cute, being all nervous about it. :D

[nyxty]

I alway think, because Sirius grew up with house elves, that he would have no sense of cleaning up after himself, lol! I'm very glad you liked it, thank you!!

[hazyshade]

Aww I really love this! :D

[nyxty]

Thank you so much!!

[sinklikeastone]

shoebox-standard! that was beautiful!

[nyxty]

Shoebox-standard?? Best. Comment. Ever. Hahaha! Thank you!!!

[sjazzmreow]

Aww, that was nice, and suited them so well. I love how you write them, they feel like such boys. ^^ Enjoyed that; very cute.

One little thing: “Let’s here it.”, should be hear. And "candy" is "sweets" in England.

[nyxty]

I'm so happy to hear that they come off as boys because I always try to keep that in mind. And, that horrible error, has been fixed, thank you for pointing that out to me because I can't believe I let that slip by!! Thank you!!! :D