Comments | nyxlily: SPN Fic: A Haunting

nyxlily

SPN Fic: A Haunting

Jun 29, 2007 23:55

Title: A Haunting -
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supernatural fic, challenge

Comments 14

Thanks! kayto1 July 2 2007, 14:19:53 UTC

Sad ending though -I wish (doesn't everyone but then that wouldn't be the boys....)that they could talk...

Re: Thanks! nyxlily July 4 2007, 08:43:03 UTC

I know! But hey, it just makes the moments when they DO have a little heart to heart all the more poignant and special, right?

Thanks for reading and for your comment!

misswonderheart July 2 2007, 20:18:06 UTC

What surprises me is that this kind of stuff doesn't happen more often!

Though I've gotta say... I thought they were going to kiss! (I blame Buffy...)

Very nice use of the prompt! Dean-as-Eric was quite touching, I thought...

(P.S. Hugs help spirits move on! Pass the word! Are you listening, Kripke?!?)

nyxlily July 4 2007, 08:50:04 UTC

I thought about having them kiss, but there's only so much embarrassment I can inflict on the boys. Okay, and now my brain is wandering into the "ghosts made them do it" category. There *was* a thought process leading to that, but I won't go into it.

The boys definitely need to hug more. Manly hugs, of course, 'cause they're our boys.

Thank you for reading and leaving this wonderful comment!

banana_cave July 3 2007, 00:32:54 UTC

Cool! I liked that story. It was funny, too!

Just one thing, I think you forgot a "d" at the end of this phrase: "Dean hadn't move" Sorry, I can't get rid of the editor inside of me!

nyxlily July 4 2007, 08:53:11 UTC

You SO need to be my beta for my stories :D

Haha, just kidding. Stop panicking!

Thank you so much for reading, and for leaving a comment! Glad that you liked it.

Oh, and I think it'd be HI-larious if you write a smutty slash fic and force Nick to beta it for you. I don't know why that'd be funny.. it's late and I need my sleep, apparently.

banana_cave July 6 2007, 00:13:41 UTC

Sure, I will beta for you. I love to edit things, although I can't spell and I'm not that good at grammar, haha.

I don't write smutty slash fic, in fact, I don't write two of those three words. I'll let you guess which, haha.

curtainpull July 3 2007, 11:27:46 UTC

I know you had to rush, but that was really nice! Good atmosphere, and WHY DON'T THE BOYS EVER TALK GODDAMIT!

nyxlily July 4 2007, 08:55:31 UTC

Thank you! For taking the time to read and leaving a comment :D

I had a week, so there's no excuse for rushing.. well, procastination is an excuse, right? I'm just glad I produced something halfway decent and made the deadline.

kimonkey7 July 4 2007, 00:19:37 UTC

I really, really liked the descriptions of the house in this..the way that nature was taking the whole thing back. The smell of the woods inside the walls. Nice detail.

I had scrolled down and knew this was short, but I kept wanting it not to resolve. It felt like it could be a piece of a much larger puzzle.

Nicely done.

And keep playing! Yay! You guys are so good with these prompts! :)

nyxlily July 4 2007, 08:59:21 UTC

Thank yor for taking the time to read this and leaving such a lovely comment! You must be a busy busy person, what with real life and the comm and your own fics to take care of. So, just to let you know, I (and most likely everyone at found_fic) really apprecaites the time you're putting into it.

The ending is somewhat what I had in mind, but the getting TO it part was definitely cut short and rushed so I could make the midnight (it's still midnight, right?) deadline. Hmm.. now I have a question.. but I'll post it at the comm, just in case it comes up for anybody else.