Comments | nyxlily: Supernatural fic: Road in Nebraska

nyxlily

Supernatural fic: Road in Nebraska

Apr 15, 2007 13:29

Title: Road in Nebraska
Category: General/Gen
Word Count: 1043
Rating: G
Summary:The road stretches before them. A storm is brewing a few miles behind. Dean's in the driver's seat and Sam is content with that.

( They have been driving northward up the lonely two-lane county road for miles, the radio a low background noise and the hum of the road and the steady engine rumble sounding in harmony, filling the silence. )

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Comments 9

anonymous April 17 2007, 05:02:48 UTC

Very nice. Love quiet times together with the boys. Felt like I was sitting in the back seat watching Sam watch Dean.

iamstealthyone April 17 2007, 16:51:16 UTC

Nice, quiet interlude. I like the mood you created here.

Favorite lines:

His brother is dark against the dying light, his shadow stretching across the road and reaches the dust covered Impala. Sam's mind randomly thinks that some part of Dean will always be connected to the car.

Nice image, and that last line feels so right. Dean and the car really are one.

He glances over to Dean, once again tapping a rhythm of his own making on the wheel, out of beat with the music on the radio, then he closes his eyes, trusting his brother to get them to the next motel. Perhaps not before the storm catches up, but at least arriving safe at their destination.

Lovely ending.

nyxlily May 17 2007, 22:48:50 UTC

I am so embarrassed by the fact that I'm responding to you a month after you left your comment. And am sorry for the same reason.

Anyway.. better late than never? lol

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you like the mood, because I was really going for the quiet ambiance and solitude experienced by long road trips. So I'm happy that didn't fail to come across.

I apologize for the LONG delay in replying and thank you for reading!

iamstealthyone May 18 2007, 05:38:00 UTC

I apologize for the LONG delay in replying and thank you for reading!

No worries about the delay, and thanks again for a good read. :)

mgbutterfly April 18 2007, 04:10:43 UTC

Sometimes the quiet moments like this say more about these boys than all the fights and moments in between.

I think you captured them perfectly. This is a moment that I can see happening. It's like I'm there, watching them.

Lovely.

nyxlily May 17 2007, 22:53:23 UTC

Hi, I'm sorry for the long delay in replying to this!

I'm happy to hear that you liked this; your words in describing your response to it also makes me happy! I tried to word the imagery as I saw it the best I could, so it's great that it worked!

Again, thanks for reading and I apologize for not replying right away.

belleimani April 21 2007, 16:27:39 UTC

Love this, very contemplative.

nyxlily May 17 2007, 22:56:18 UTC

Sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment!

Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it. It's always appreciated that people take the time to read and/or review, so thank you VERY much for leaving a comment!

belleimani May 18 2007, 11:55:37 UTC

You're welcome and no problem!