White Noise, Chapter 1

[nyxelestia]

Title: White Noise
Rating: R (overall fic), PG-13 (this chapter)
Summary: Keller took Elizabeth, and Neal will do anything it takes to get her back.
Word Count: 3,000 (this chapter)
Warnings/Content: language, mentions of kidnapping (this chapter); kidnapping, abuse/violence (overall fic)
Beta: None :( - if you’re interested in beta’ing, let me

Comments

[angelqueen04]

Oh my goodness!! You just nailed everyone -- Peter, Neal, Mozzie, all of them! So amazing! I really have a feeling that we're going to see at least some of this on our television screens when the show starts up again tomorrow.

Great job! I love how Neal reminded Mozzie of June's friend and how there's never a final score. He made a good point that even if Mozzie keeps the treasure, it's going to weigh him down and keep him on the run for the rest of his life. Even if Peter isn't the one to chase him, every law enforcement agency in the world is going to be hunting him for the rest of his life.

Riveting! Thanks so much for sharing this! Looking forward to what comes next! Amazing as always! :)

[nyxelestia]

I've always believed a story is its characters, so I'm glad to hear you like them. :) Thank you for your comment!

[micheleeeex]

I love this! Can't wait for more :)

[nyxelestia]

Glad to hear you like it. :) Thank you for commenting!

[morganslady]

OK I'm hooked!!

[nyxelestia]

Glad to hear it. :)

[flareonfury]

Definitely in love with this - everyone is in-character and I find hard to believe it wouldn't be something like this in the new episodes.

♥

[nyxelestia]

Still haven't seen the new episodes D: but I'm glad the fic matches up and that you like it. Thank you for commenting!