Loyalties: Shadows Of The Light

[kendayawind]

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Lay/Chen
Genre: AU!Criminal, Drama, Romance
Summary: There’d always be a risk with their association alone, ties that should have been severed between a rookie cop and an underling since the start. Its a price neither can afford, but continue gambling.

Comments

[kendayawind]

Lien's Spot!

[rssj1314]

Chenlay ;A; This is sooooo good and omg I love their relationship T^T

"Then sleeping with a doctor has its benefits, no?" OMG YES

I love how you stringed in Lay's changing attitude over time and how Chen is kinda obsessed with Lay. The part where he was being kissed and molested by some random dude almost made me cry ;A; but ugggggh this is so cruel and pretty at the same tiiiiiiiimeee.

This pairing is beautiful and perfect. So perfect T.T

I also love how they keep, like, saving each other in tricky situations where they almost get caught. Talk about being professional. lol. No, but really, this is so sweet and pretty~ I love it.

It's a little depressing-- kinda like all these other.. what do you call them?... Loyalty one-shot inserts? But they're all good! So much love to you for writing a Chenlay ;A;

ILY~

♥Lien

[aosoira]

thankyu for sharing great long written laychen fic.
poor chen, i'm happy that lay could manage to free him from the clan.
i guess Sungmin partner is Henry.
:D

[kendayawind]

It is long... I kept trying to condense it but it just kept growing ;-; Decided to stop myself before it became a novel.

Sungmin's partner is Eunhyuk, but he will be included :)(can I help that I adore Henry so much I want to put him in everything?)

I attempted at this pairing for a dear friend of mine, but finding that I'm growing a soft spot. Glad you enjoyed it ^^ And thank you for taking the time to comment~! :)

[aosoira]

oh. hohohohoho ^o^
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sure you can. there's even his surname on this fic. Henry is adorable anyway. =}
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long beautiful fics is always a pleasant thing to read.
you welcome ~

[hennu15]

I really really liked this O: ♥

[kendayawind]

Happy you do ^^ Thank you for taking the time to comment!

[shirahimejj]

I like, I like, I like~~ *waves LayChen flag*

I'm glad it had a happy ending, it was quite a tense universe. Had me worried there... *pictures Lay as an aging cop & Chen with the tattoo* ^__^ Cool story, I enjoyed it~

[kendayawind]

I'm glad :D *waves the flag with you* It really is, .-. I love cop/criminal/procedural series but was always hesitant in writing it... but then now it just unraveled ^^; I still prefer happy endings :) (and so far, don't think that's going to change.)

Thank you for taking the time to comment!

[sica_is_love]

Um... wow. This was amazing(ly depressing as well)

That infrangible attraction between Chen & Lay. The risks they would take for each other without even admitting that they cared for each other. Heartbreakingly beautiful. I'm surprised they didn't get killed. ;___;

Thank you for this exquisite piece!

[kendayawind]

Depressing seems to summarize most of my Loyalties!Au one-shots... Chen and Lay were engrossed with each other from the start, even if where they began wasn't exactly ideal.

(I can never kill! (Yet)) Not sure if that my change in the future... but thank you for taking the time to comment~! :)