Comments | nyx_kendaya: Loyalties: Cardinal Interests

kendayawind in nyx_kendaya

Loyalties: Cardinal Interests

May 04, 2012 01:06

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kyusung
Genre: AU!General, Comedy, Romance
Summary: A forensic accountant who realizes something he wasn't suppose to. Now he's forced to run and ends up in the reluctant arms of a rookie cop who’s clearly in way over his head.

( Why did he have a knack for numbers? Why of all things he had to be good at, it had to be math? )

c: yesung, fic♠au: loyalties, pairing: kyusung, type: fanfiction, type: yaoi, c: kyuhyun

Comments 12

kendayawind May 4 2012, 08:07:11 UTC

Lien's Spot!

hyukhae4ever May 4 2012, 09:12:33 UTC

oh my god! kyuhyun, you.... xD
puahahhahaha...
this just fits my imagination of a bad boy Yesung! (who cares if he has the most boring job that i've known)
him holding a gun is just unf!!
love the ending xD

kendayawind May 7 2012, 09:27:32 UTC

Forensic accountants, in the end all I can see are numbers and more of them @.@ Still in awe how they can do. Bad boy Yesung <3! I see so many instances of it that the image just stays <3

Happy you enjoyed it :D Thank you for commenting~! ^^

ruuusak May 4 2012, 10:43:16 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHA!
what did i just read? lol, that was too funny XD
and the ending, just... hahahahaha ;D :D

kendayawind May 7 2012, 09:30:17 UTC

My attempt at reverting to my newbie days ^^ Glad it brought out a laugh! Thank you for commenting~!

rhenny May 4 2012, 12:34:10 UTC

LOLOLOL! that was epic!
that was really surprising! considering it came from you. laughed really hard.

Kyuhyun seemed like to help Yesung even if he isn't a real police cop/trainee XD he was smitten by the accountant!

Yesung you must be thankful! even if Kyuhyun acts like that he still somewhat managed to save your life^^

Thank you for this^^ suddenly made me laugh (which is a good thing!)
Thank you for writing KyuSung again~
Fighting^^

kendayawind May 7 2012, 09:36:13 UTC

I know right? I'm too drawn to drama and some angst >< Sadly I used to write mainly comedies/fluffier stories in the beginning and...it sort of left me.. Trying to go back to those days ><

Who wouldn't be smitten by him? :) Kyuhyun may have bitten more than he could chew though >>. He'll be thankful, hopefully, Kyuhyun shouldn't hope it's anytime soon lol.

No prob~ Kyusung is still one of my biases :) (Just need more time to finish everything else ._.) Thank you! And thank you for taking the time to comment~!

phoenix_soar May 5 2012, 22:13:18 UTC

First reaction: DAFUQ DID I JUST READ

TROLOLOLOL xD Gosh, only you, Nyx!! XD You make fail!cop!Kyu hitting on badass!gun-wielding!Yesung the most adorable thing ever :D :D I LAUGHED SO HARD.

This was a right treat to read at 3.00 am in the morning XD

kendayawind May 7 2012, 09:45:43 UTC

xD Hope by the second reaction it came out better. I'm happy to hear laughter of any kind ^^

Can you blame me? Badass!Yesung is just too cool to resist <3 Heck, if I can't, Kyuhyun definitely cannot ;).

<3

Awesome part? I reply to this at 2:39 am, saying goodbye to my sleeping schedule~

phoenix_soar May 7 2012, 16:50:52 UTC

Oh. And I just noticed your little A/N. HAHA. Of course Yesung would relent. Eventually xP LOL

Reread this again and I loved it even more. I kinda miss simple, straight-forward, fun fics like these ... More and more stuff seem to be focusing purely on smut lately..

kendayawind May 8 2012, 01:42:07 UTC

It just takes some time :)

It's more like me and trying not to write such long stories, but it still happens! (Working on it) but I understand the simple method. Some of the summaries for smuts sort of confuse me a bit to be honest, and some lines leave very little to the imagination...

But I guess it's giving what people like, right? ^^