Mask - Chapter 7

[kendayawind]

Mask
Rating: PG-13
Subject: Yesung | Pairing: YeBum
Genre: AU!Family, Drama/Minor!Angst, Romance
Length: Chaptered
Summary: Whisked in the arms of a wealthy and charming bachelor, its all smiles and sweeping happiness in front of the camera lenses. A fairy-tale ending that was short lived.

Comments

[kendayawind]

Spot For Lien~<3! ^^

[echowillow]

The Jongwoon breaking down scene was soooo intense. I've read that scene over and over again. And your metaphoric contrast of kabuki, mask, act, revenge was ingeniously revealed.

The paint masking his vulnerabilities dripping down his flushed skin.
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He was done playing his part, the very one he began so long ago.

Wow *claps* although it's not the final curtain call yet. As a reader, I'm not a stickler for grammar but i'm all for supporting your quest to improve ^^ I'm more impressed with writers with their well woven plots who can thread their words uniquely and beautifully together to capture the essence of the scenes and their characters. Not everyone with perfect grammar can have that flair like you ♥

Perhaps Henry was too young? Jongwoon probably saw more of their mum's suffering and as the eldest, he carried more burden on his shoulders to be able to brush everything away as easily. I love the angst surrounding his relationship with Kibum!

I'll be sad to see this end but I can't wait to know what happens either :) thank you

[kendayawind]

I kept rewriting that almost too many times to count, and still I just wished I could somehow get the scene I envisioned and just laid it out.

Grammar will always remain my worst enemy, somehow it was never able to stick well with me despite school. Thank you for saying so nonetheless^^;; <3

Truth be, Henry was too young, he wasn't oblivious to what had happened. But Jongwoon tried to support both his mother and brother under the family's tyranny, trapped with what little he could do at that young age. The moment he rejected his debut was the beginning of what he set out to do.

I'm thinking Kibum doesn't rejoice in their lack of a relationship, but the future awaits them. Jongwoon simply needs to find himself first, and with Kibum's help, that may speed things along.

Thank you for reading with the story so far :) Almost done then off to the next series @.@

Thank you for commenting~ <3! ^-^ <3

[ashxiii]

(cackles madly) Oh, never actually thought of vengeance that way. Pulling a thread. True though. Pulling it would in effect unseamed someone's sanity but you just can't help but tug at it.