[ILC19] Clear As Day

[kendayawind]

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Yesung
Genre: AU!Drama, Romance, Minor!Angst
Disclaimer: I don't own any SuJu member.
Beta: paradigm_twist
IL/Pairing Assigner: rssj1314 & shadowcrawler12
[Challenge][Y][FF] Summary: Figures feared to approach what intimidated them, what frightened them. Despite their different circumstances, they found that distinct connection that held them together.

Comments

[kendayawind]

Spot For Lien~ <3! >D

[rssj1314]

OMG. I LOVE THIS STORY. I DON'T KNOW WHAT NONSENSE YOU ARE SPOUTING WHEN YOU SAY IT IS BAD, AND I DON'T KNOW WHY YOU WON'T LET ME ASK QUESTIONS

[kendayawind]

Spot For SK~<3! ^-^

[paradigm_twist]

DELINQUENT KYU! :D AND MATURE YESUNG :DDD It's sort of like a criminal AU but not at the same time. Kyu just has a really rich back up plan LOL

But I'm loving the interaction. Spoiled kid-like Kyu (because honestly, only kids are that curious about anything. Even if the thing is an ATM machine LOL) matched with the exasperated Yesung is just win. I can sort of imagine that in RL, they're kinda like that too. Yesung resisting the urge to knock his head to smack some sense into him LOL

I like the touch of sentimentality with the puzzles and the little parallels between their actions and the puzzle. Spotting a devious Kyu there LOL But Yesung, awwww..... <3

Bleh. People feared the unknown and the ugly =.= That's just stupid behaviour.

Awesome as always

<3

[echowillow]

And this was beautifully written as usual. I could feel the tension and emotions all the way.

When he felt a weight against his back, he looked from the corner of his eye as Yesung leaned against him. He heard an inaudible but clear "Thank you."
The times when Yesung was vulnerable, every time he appeared that way, left him often unprepared.

This just grabbed me by the chest and left my breath hanging literally. Thank you for writing ♥

[kendayawind]

Thank you very much for saying so (apologize for the late reply, been in and out ><.)

I'm relieved the emotions got across ^^; Still working on describing things since I'm prone to dialogue, but its progress I hope ^-^

Thank you for taking the time to comment~~! :D

[rhenny]

It is so great... （ ﾟДﾟ）
I haven't read this type of KyuSung for a long time so I'm asdfghjklasdfghjkl...

sorry for the incoherence!
the puzzles.... i love them so much!
Kyuhyun getting caught because of his curiosity and mischievousness? LOL good thing mature Yesung is there! Yay!

Kyuhyun can really understand every action Yesung makes... They are perfect...

I'm really happy reading this!
It's awesomeness is as clear as the day!
thak you very much for this~

[kendayawind]

It feels like forever since I last wrote kyusung @.@ I couldn't help but incorporate puzzles, been a obsession of mine lately ^^;

Kyuhyun does understand :) Yesung's hesitance makes it difficult otherwise if he didn't have some idea ><

Thank you for reading and commenting~! :)

[phoenix_soar]

Gosh, when was the last time I read a fic like this? *.* This is just brilliant.

Your characterizations! OMG, they were amazing. Kyuhyun as an overly curious delinquent(?) and Yesung as the mature, sarcastic one xD Awesome, I say!

I loved the hospital scenes and their interactions. How their relationship had such an unorthodox start, but then gradually grew until both understood every little action of the other. It was sweet, in a serious sort of way.

I adore this! ♥

[kendayawind]

Kyuhyun's delinquency can be accounted for xD His curiosity would kill most people, luckily Yesung catches him when he can. Or at least... spares him a few years in prison.

I'm glad ^^ I'm slowly putting in hospitals in stories, I'm always hesitant since my knowledge of anything medical is...not much. I believe not every relationship starts off with flowers and all that sweet, but things can happen out of these unorthodox meetings ^^

Thank you for taking the time to comment~! ^-^