Comments | nyx_kendaya: Giving In To Chance

kendayawind in nyx_kendaya

Giving In To Chance

Apr 16, 2011 15:35

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kyusung
Genre: AU!General, Romance
Disclaimer: I don't own any SuJu member.
Beta: paradigm_twist
[Y][FF] Summary: He acted nonchalant to the man who says his feelings too easily, who states them without hesitation, who is willing to give everything to mere chance. A chance he's reluctant to give.

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c: yesung, | length: one-shots, pairing: kyusung, type: fanfiction, type: yaoi, c: kyuhyun

Comments 38

paradigm_twist April 18 2011, 01:28:01 UTC

I knew this was going to be popular ;) It has all these great elements in it. Never wanted to throw my accounting textbook at Yesung for being such a blockhead > <

It was such a great fic to read. Plus, the editing process is getting easier and faster. Your grammar is totally improving :D

/nods. It's nice having a regular posting schedule yes? :D

kendayawind April 18 2011, 06:35:21 UTC

That sixth sense~ xD I'd join in, but I have ton more textbooks where that came from ;D If he had rejected any further, I'm ready to aim >D

I'm trying still >< I must teach myself grammar one of these days! Or... just hope it magically makes sense one day (That'd be a miracle) lol.

It definitely is ^^ I like the thought of being able to post once a week, but I'm afraid for the May ILC challenges lol, I see potential headache in that month but I'm game >D

Thank you for editing/reading/commenting~! :D Can't wait for your monday fic~ (oh shoot that's today O.O) WOOH!

paradigm_twist April 18 2011, 06:53:04 UTC

LOL. I can see the potential problem in that as well. You have to give me the dates for that so I can plan the editing process :)

Grammar takes practice. Which you have plenty with all these writing :)

ITS UP. SAVED YOU A SPOT :D Don't hit me when you read it @.@

cynder8 May 13 2011, 07:48:28 UTC

this was sweet!! persistent kyu! that's different, in most kyusung stories, it's yesung doing the pursuing. & holding out for so long too. idk what he was afraid of, maybe of getting hurt, but glad he gave kyu a chance. glad it ended happily for them. :)

kendayawind May 16 2011, 01:52:25 UTC

Kyuhyun needs to chase every once in a while :) I'm glad too, Yesung was initially hesitant but happy to see Kyuhyun's persistence paid off~ ^-^

Indeed a happy ending ;) Thank you for reading and commenting~! :D

krixtalyx August 20 2011, 16:59:02 UTC

AGH SO SWEEEEEEET MY GOSH OFFICE LIFE KYUSUNG IS JUST AHJKDHSKLFDYHSJKLDFHSGJKHDKLJFGUDKLSGJUDSKDFSJKLFDSJLF

YOU FOREVER JUST MADE MY WHOLE DAY, AND HAVE I MENTIONED HOW MUCH I LOVE KYUHYUN IN HERE?! YESUNG IS SUCH A JERK THOUGH TROLOLOLOLOL BUT THE CUTIE AT THE END IS SWEET ENOUGH TO GIVE HIM A CHANCE<3

kendayawind September 5 2011, 06:16:03 UTC

Before I reply, wanted to apologize for the extremely late reply ><

and xD YAY~! Glad you enjoyed it :) I enjoyed writing his character and making Yesung that way, for once Kyuhyun shouldn't always be chased >< Yesung just couldn't resist him in the end ^^

Thank you for taking the time to comment <3

echowillow October 8 2011, 00:09:50 UTC

oh my, I really like how your worded this piece of story, very well written and almost abstract.

"Your eyes are nice. But nothing is as attractive as your voice." Kyuhyun said, suddenly reaching for a wet towel and gingerly dabbed his forehead. "My heart's ready to do somersaults whenever you speak."
I can feel the love. Only love can cause someone to feel like that. I like how you chose to show Kyu's love in that way, through that sentence.

Even as they walked side by side along the streets, Kyuhyun still held on to his hand securely, daringly giving everything to chance.
That last sentence is just, I dunno, but just so good ♥ Thanks for writing!

kendayawind October 15 2011, 03:29:04 UTC

Ah, I hope not too abstract >< There's always a fine line I seem not to always see when writing ^^; Kyuhyun's love is in every direction, with every visible sign towards Yesung, sadly Yesung doesn't seem to keen at first. Things change however :)

Glad you enjoyed it :D Thank you for taking the time to comment~! ^^

niayesungie October 16 2011, 17:53:43 UTC

girl, i really love how you wrote your fic.though you didn't explain the reason behind Yesung's behavior aroud Kyu most of the moment, it's really natural. and yes, sometimes we just never thought of whys.

kendayawind October 27 2011, 01:33:25 UTC

Glad you do ^^ And I tried not to make reasons for Yesung mostly, I always tend to do that, but then I realized that irl, I don't always know myself either. Sometimes you want a reason to go against someone, but just can't fathom one ><

Kyuhyun suffered a bit from that part, but it finally came through to him in the end ^^;

Thank you for taking the time to comment~! :)