A Dozen Roses (1/1)

[nytel]

Title: A Dozen Roses
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Romance
Summary: Kara keeps getting roses.
Spoilers: Nothing really.
Word Count: 3,083
Beta: The wonderful i_am_girlfriday!
Disclaimer: They aren't mine, I'm just playing.
A/N: Set some time between You Can't Go Home Again and Colonial Day. It's slightly AU as Helo is on Galactica and not

Comments

[i_am_girlfriday]

That is so cute. Seriously. I've read it just a few times, and it DOES NOT GET OLD :) I really liked all the changes you made, I think they really helped tighten the story. Wonderful! And...I'm beginning to like red roses again...

[nytel]

Heehee, I'm glad you still like it after mutliple readings.

I tried to do all that you said, but there are still quite a few adverbs. I just love them too much! Lol.

You know what, I don't think I've ever gotten roses... Okay, virtual ones once.

[mlsky]

Lovely! And I love how you address the difficulty of finding flowers in the fleet. Nice detail.

Thoroughly enjoyed this!

[nytel]

Thanks! And I was hoping to add in a bit of realism. :)

[burned_phoenix]

this was so very cute and romantic!

“Why are you giving me flowers?” Kara asked.
Helo laughed at her comment. “I’m not.”
Kara fought the urge to roll her eyes. “*Yes*, you are!” She stated.
Karl shook his head. “It’s not from me.” Still grinning, he turned and left.
“Karl!” She shouted after him, but he was already at the exit.

“Whoa,” he said as he jogged up to her. “Don’t shoot the messenger.”

She had no idea who it was, but the thought still made her smile. Even if it turned out to be Chuckles or Hot Dog, someone thought she was worthy of roses.

She was holding the eleven roses and every few seconds she would sniff them, savoring the sweet scent. She was probably the only woman in the entire fleet with eleven red roses, and the thought made her happy.

Kara got out of her bunk and moved to stand in front of Lee. “Someone gave me flowers.” She held out the roses in front of her.

were some of my favorite parts :) you had me smiling from the start :) And Kara so deserves it!

[nytel]

*g* I'm so glad you liked it!

I love romantic pilots. *swoons*

[burned_phoenix]

me too! *sighs*

I'm just finishing jatnj's birthday wallpaper at the moment :)

[starbuck042786]

Sometimes Kara can be so DENSE! Of course it was Lee giving you the flowers! DUH!

But anyway... loved the fluffy happiness- Great Job

[nytel]

I know! Poor Kara. Lol.

Thanks!

[viper_knight]

This is perfectly lovely. Fluffy but not sacharine.

♥ I'm such a fan of this!

Thanks for sharing it with us!

[nytel]

Thanks, I was hoping I wasn't overdosing.

I'm glad you liked it. :D

P.S. In regards to betaing... I would ask you, but it's taking me way too long to get the chapters done. As soon as I finish I pretty much need to post before readers start to shoot me. Lol. Sorry hun, I really wish I had the time to let you do your thing.

*hugs*

Hope everything is well in your world.

[viper_knight]

That's absolutely fine--if you have any specific questions, however, feel free to ask me :)

It's great at the moment actually (shockingly!)