BSG Fic: Lips of an Angel [K/L]

Aug 17, 2006 13:56

Title: Lips of an Angel
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: LYDB 2 and some season 3 speculation.
Pairing: Kara/Lee and Lee/Dee
Genre: Romance/Angst
Summary: Lee finds it hard to be faithful.
Word Count: 4,109
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kara/lee, bsg, one shot fic, bsg fic, fan fic

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futurobrillante August 18 2006, 01:47:53 UTC
This was so sad and so sweet. Poor guilt-ridden Lee.

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nytel August 18 2006, 05:48:54 UTC
I know. I'm so mean to Lee. Lol. Poor boy.

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i_am_girlfriday August 18 2006, 06:06:51 UTC
Is it bad that I was thinking of ways for Dee to not be pregnant and not be married to Lee anymore? That's how bad you made me want Lee to choose Kara!

I'm going to friend you. We seem to run in the same circle--half my f-list already commented here :) Hope you don't mind.

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nytel August 18 2006, 06:11:44 UTC
Not at all. I was actually going to friend you too. :D Can't be sure how much time I'll actually have to check my friends list posts for the next little bit, but whatever.

Oh yes, and I want Lee to choose Kara too. Lol. (Um, could you tell?)

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kimtraxler August 18 2006, 09:11:08 UTC
Very nice piece, I definitely enjoyed this. So full of what could have been. I just got home from the Arrowhead Pond in Anaheim. Hinder opened for Nickelback, so I was already thinking this song.

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nytel August 18 2006, 16:02:17 UTC
Oh wow, that must have been awesome.

Thanks, and I'm glad you liked it. :)

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abditorium August 18 2006, 12:12:18 UTC
That really was beautifully written. I could feel the pain each of them were holding inside, and I couldn't help but wish they could just escape from theri current partners and be together. But then, I do appreciate the beauty of tragedy as well.

Very, very well done.

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nytel August 18 2006, 16:03:59 UTC
Thank you so much. As sad as it is, I'm glad that you could feel the pain. I want them to be together too, but I just can't help myself from writing angst sometimes.

Thanks for the feedback. :D

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jayl August 18 2006, 22:24:35 UTC
So excellent. Your characterization felt completely spot-on, and the words and emotions rang very true. Now I just have to hope this situation never actually happens, 'cause that would make me just way too sad.

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