Summer Nights (15/?)

[nytel]

Title: Summer Nights (15/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: NC-17 (or at least it will be)
Spoilers: Nada. It's a pre-mini AU fic.
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Romance
Summary: Neither of them had been expecting anything other than a normal summer break.
Word Count: 5,148
Beta: ez_as_pi 
Disclaimer: I am merely borrowing them. No copyright infringement is intended

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[artemis_90]

Oh I absolutely love love the reveal to Michael. The waiting has been worth it. But now how will he respond?

Nice group outing, but I'm not quite sure about the band - is it gonna be a plotline or just a device for Michael to get to appreciate his sister more?

Can't wait to see Michael will do and if Bill will show up (you keep hinting at it.) Also, will Kara and Lee ever realize they are more than just frak buddies?

[nytel]

Thanks! I've been waiting for this for a while, the moment when Michael finally realizes. :) As for his reaction... I've got a couple of ideas I'm toying with. ;)

The band is just more of a backstory thing for Kara, give her a little bit more realism. Kind of help bring her and Michael a bit closer. It's not really a main plot point. It'll likely be mentioned a couple of times in the future, but not as anything big. It was also a way to get Jean over to their house. Lol.

Can't wait to see Michael will do and if Bill will show up (you keep hinting at it.) Also, will Kara and Lee ever realize they are more than just frak buddies?
--I'm pretty sure I know which way I'm leaning for the Michael thing. As for Bill... perhaps not in the capacity you'd expect, but I'm pretty sure he'll pop up before the story is done. And Kara and Lee... that's the question everyone wants answered. Lol. You'll see. ;)

Thanks for reading!

[smcki10]

i loved it, can't wait for more

[nytel]

Thank you. :)

[arielmoondance]

Well the cat is out of the bag. I just hope the two ding a lings can figure out their feelings before the end of the summer.

Great update!

[nytel]

Hee hee, that it is!

I just hope the two ding a lings can figure out their feelings before the end of the summer.
--*g*

[rdave1]

That was just awesome how Michael with the help from Zak and Jean figured out Lee and Kara were frakking. Hopefully those two will talk and let each other know that it is more then that. I love Zak and Jean in the mix. The car scene with Jean, Zak and Kara was adorable; it reminds of a when my baby sister used to tag along with me and my friend and they use to treat her like that.

Great chapter. Please, Please update soon.

[nytel]

That was just awesome how Michael with the help from Zak and Jean figured out Lee and Kara were frakking.
--And now Michael is finally in the loop! Lol.

Hopefully those two will talk and let each other know that it is more then that.
--We shall see. ;)

I love Zak and Jean in the mix.
--Thanks, I really enjoy that I get the chance to play with different characters in this AU.

The car scene with Jean, Zak and Kara was adorable; it reminds of a when my baby sister used to tag along with me and my friend and they use to treat her like that.
--I'm happy to hear that! I don't have any first hand knowledge to draw on here, because my sister rarely ever tagged along with me, but it's just how I could picture it happening. :)

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

[zommbie1]

Oh this was a great instalment. Great reveal for Michael. I really want to see what he says/does now. And I too want to know when Kara and Lee are going to realise what they actually mean to each other.

[nytel]

Thank you! I thought it was time for Michael to finally get on the same page as everyone else. :)

And I too want to know when Kara and Lee are going to realise what they actually mean to each other.
--*grins*

Thanks for reading, and for letting me know what you thought!