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Summer Nights (7/?)

Jul 06, 2008 21:17

Title: Summer Nights (7/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: NC-17 (or at least it will be)
Spoilers: Nada. It's a pre-mini AU fic.
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Genre: Romance
Summary: Neither of them had been expecting anything other than a normal summer break.
Word Count: 5,759 (OMG, I still can't believe how long this chapter is!)
Beta: None for this chapter. Any mistakes are ( Read more... )

kara/lee, bsg, summer nights, bsg fic, fan fic

Comments 27

anonymous July 7 2008, 04:45:15 UTC

I need to finally start a livejournal page one of these days so that I don't have to post anonymously. But, anyway, I love this story. I happened upon it while looking at other fanfics at BeyondInsane. It's so good in fact that I bookmarked your page so I could keep updated on this one and read more of your fics. This was another great chapter. I loved how Lee is opening up to Kara, and she is becoming more aware of her feelings for him. I can't wait for more!

nytel July 17 2008, 02:49:25 UTC

Ljs are awesome. :)

I'm flattered that you bookmarked my journal. *g*

And yes, pilots are moving along. ;)

antismiles July 7 2008, 05:00:19 UTC

I have so much love for this chapter, I can't even tell you. So I'll just say that it was awesome and I can't wait for the next. :)

nytel July 17 2008, 02:49:43 UTC

Ah, thanks. :)

bloodedangel July 7 2008, 05:34:41 UTC

Yet again you amaze me. Loved it and cannot wait to see what happens next.

nytel July 17 2008, 02:50:08 UTC

*blushes* Thank you. :)

lurker2209 July 7 2008, 06:23:50 UTC

So next chapter, skinny dipping?

I'm having a lot of fun reading this AU. At first I though you'd sort of smoothed out the rough edges of their histories, but now I see that you've just mixed things up a bit. Buried the pain a little deeper, but it still comes out.

nytel July 17 2008, 02:51:27 UTC

Lol. That's what everyone is guessing, but I guess you'll just have to read and see. ;)

I like to think that Kara and Lee are slightly less damaged in this AU, but I couldn't bring myself to take away what I think is a lot of what makes them who they are. It's fun to mix it up a bit though. :)

elzed July 7 2008, 09:47:27 UTC

I can't believe they've been alone in the house for several days and still haven't ripped the clothes off each other (although I did like Kara's casual "You'll be fine" - because he is, dammit- at the suggestion Lee clothe his naked chest.)

Can't wait for the next chapter, where I suspect the lake might offer opportunities...

Love this.

nytel July 17 2008, 02:52:41 UTC

Lol. Apparently pilots have good self-restraint! I just wonder how long it'll last... *g*

The lake is definitely important, I'll say that much. ;)

Thanks for reading!