Learning Curve (2/?)

[nytel]

Title: Learning Curve (2/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 408
Pairing: Ronon/Keller
Genre: Fluff, Pre-Relationship
Summary: Jen gets some private self-defense lessons.
Word Count: 3,170
Beta: The wonderful 

Comments

[sireesanwar]

I loved how much they were thinking about each other. I also loved while Ronon can't get her off his mind... he hasn't figured out why. More please.

[nytel]

*g* Thank you. I don't think either of them was expecting to have such a good time together.

I think Ronon's well on his way to figuring out what this means. As for Jen... well, maybe it'll take her a bit longer. ;)

[sireesanwar]

I can't wait. I'm sure Jenn will be so cute with Ronon. I can see him figuring things out first because he's more confident in his decisions.

[nytel]

Exactly. :) I really do think they are the perfect match for each other. *g*

[wive]

I love how Ronon thinks about what happened and going over it in his mind.

The teasing from Teyla & John. Perfect!
Heh! And the Ronon/Keller bumping. Genius!

I also like how you took Teyla's pregnancy and put in here. Her thoughts and Jen's offer to help.

More please! *bats eyelashes* ;0)

HUGS!

[nytel]

I love how Ronon thinks about what happened and going over it in his mind.
--Thanks. :) I can just see him being caught off guard by what happened, not having expected it at all.

The teasing from Teyla & John. Perfect!
--*g* I couldn't resist.

And the Ronon/Keller bumping. Genius!
-- Thanks! :)

I also like how you took Teyla's pregnancy and put in here. Her thoughts and Jen's offer to help
--Thank you. I had mentioned it in the first chapter, so I really couldn't get away with not dealing with it in this chapter. I actually kind of like it though, because it gives Jen more of a reason to be directly involved with all of them, as opposed to just Ronon. You know, kind of making her a part of the team almost.

And don't worry, there will be more, as soon as I can manage it. :)

[katethegater]

Yay - another chapter!

What i love about the Ronon character is that on the outside he's this huge,hairy, menacing 'wookie like' bloke but deep down he's quite gentle, sensetive and a little lonely.

Jen will be so good for him! - go jump him girlfriend! (giggle)

[nytel]

Yep, another chapter. :)

I like Ronon's character too, and for that same reason. And I agree, Jen will be good for him. ;)

[nicole9514]

very nice hon :)

lol it is funny how our minds work in the same way..i think you'll see what i mean when i finally get my next chapter typed and edited lol, it's written already so don't think i copied you lol. let's say i'm using teyla to further things along as well, and the pregancy to form a closer friendship b/t the two women lol

[nytel]

*g* Thank you!

it is funny how our minds work in the same way..i think you'll see what i mean when i finally get my next chapter typed and edited lol, it's written already so don't think i copied you lol. let's say i'm using teyla to further things along as well, and the pregancy to form a closer friendship b/t the two women
--Awesome, I can't wait to read it. :) And it's totally understandable that there will be several similarities between the two. No worries. :)

[nath_42]

WoW ! I love the way you write all the characters. Very realistic.
I like the idea too. Ronon teaching Keller how to fight eheh ! sure it doesn't look like Rodney's ninja fight ! lol.
Working on chapter 3 ? Great !

[nytel]

*blushes* Thank you! I'm having quite a bit of fun with this story. :)

The idea was actually a prompt from a friend. It was intended to be a one shot, but then... yeah. Lol. I got sucked in. ;)

Chapter 3 is up actually. (Finally) Would have had it posted yesterday if my internet hadn't been acting up.

Thanks for reading. :)