Sam you have done justice and then some, sweetheart. Wow. I really love this piece. It's going into my memories file for sure.
My absolute favourite part is:
Even after everything you do to me Shredding open my body Pulling free my thriving love Trembling B r e a k i n g open my universe that rests on your fingers
“I still love you…” “Well, you shouldn’t…We aren’t meant to last forever”
You stand up and walk away Stripping me of everything I know
awww Autumn, thank you so much!!!! you don't know how much this means to me!!!! *blushes and smiles wide* im so happy right now!!! :D i can't wait to show my class and tell them how you have inspired me so ♥ ~Sam~
Wow. I'm impressed. I like this one a lot, Sam. It's one of the best I've read by you so far. Bravo! I do believe I'm going to have to put this in my memories too. You really kicked this poem's ass! Well done, Sam.
awww *blushes and smiles* thanksssss i really like this one, too and all these compliments might go straight to my head...i better be careful :P ♥ ~Sam~
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Sam you have done justice and then some, sweetheart. Wow. I really love this piece. It's going into my memories file for sure.
My absolute favourite part is:
Even after everything you do to me
Shredding open my body
Pulling free my thriving love
Trembling
B r e a k i n g open my universe that rests on your fingers
“I still love you…”
“Well, you shouldn’t…We aren’t meant to last forever”
You stand up and walk away
Stripping me of everything I know
Brava. ♥
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I do believe I'm going to have to put this in my memories too. You really kicked this poem's ass! Well done, Sam.
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