Betrayed page 6

[shaya22]

Writer: shaya22
Main charakters: Chinen Yuri, Murata Hirona
Guests: Nakajima Yuto, Kawashima Umika, Nishiwaki Sayaka, Yoshii Kanae
Teaser: festival is closer day by day, the same with Hirona and Chinen who work together on it, but suddenly apparent calm feelings change...

Comments

[aemrith]

wow that was fast! :) hoho, me first?

okay... Yuto... why does this guy have to be so darn nice and sweet all the time!?

and whoa... violence? this story's getting pretty serious.

i was a little scared of chii, but yeah, i think he did okay. i mean, anger drives people to be different sometimes.

yosh! You did a fantastic one here shaya22. thanks for this really intense and interesting chapter!

more challenge to the next authors! ^_^

[aemrith]

oh, may I add? Love, love, love Yuto! haha! especially in this chapter. kawaii so. *^_^*

[shaya22]

thank you so much for reading, I've tried so hard to make it...
and about Yuto... it's just because he's that cute, isn't he? ;)

[nikasantos]

I actually like this!! i like it because first we think hoo Hirona is good and stuff and then because of her friends her image changes completelly and I like that!

[shaya22]

thank you!
This time again it wasn't me who kicked somebody but.. still there is a chance xD
You know what I mean ;)

[nikasantos]

Yeee...LOL!!!! there is a chance your right!!

[katrinalacson]

lil sister's comment:
yup!
this getting INTENSE~...o.O
and I can feel it!!!!!!!!
GOSH~!!!
You know it, i LOVE this!!!:D

neechan, daisuki!!! ♥

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[shaya22]

~neechan is happy ♥ !!
atashi mo daisuki desu!

haha I hope the next writer wouldn't be mad at me about this chapter...
anyway, I'm glad you like it sis :*

[columbin3]

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!~
I love Yuto..
and I love him more in here. waaaaah!
this is so... sweet..
but the end part was really devastating ne!~
Chii got really mad. tsk2x..

by the way, you're fast.
I just read the 5th chapter a while ago.
hehe! :)

[shaya22]

well... I tried my best but now I'm wondering if it was good idea to post it so soon, because of previous writer...

anyway thank you for reading it
and Yuto is really ... ♥

[tsubasa_quill]

OMG I LOVE THIS!!!

This just makes things even more...spicy XD

Yuto is a sweetheart...nuff said :P

poor umi and now chi's gone personal against hiro...

well done!!!

<3

good luck to the next writers!!

[shaya22]

spicy? lol I didn't have in my mind somebody find it spicy there but it's good, right?
thanks for comment :)

[tsubasa_quill]

haha...yes it's good :)

thanx for writing ^^