Comments | nxtpageurstory: Betrayed page 4

tsubasa_quill in nxtpageurstory

Betrayed page 4

Feb 23, 2011 03:58

Writer : tsubasa_quill

Main Characters: Chinen Yuri, Murata Hirona

Guests: Nakajima Yuto, Kawashima Umika, Nishiwaki Sayaka, Yoshii Kanae, Satake Uki, Yamada Ryosuke

Teaser: Hirona might really be infatuated with her 'accomplice' and Umika remains heart broken. Chinen though, won't back down that easily, after all he loved her.

( Read more... )

/chinen yuri, /yamada ryosuke, :9nine - murata hirona, :9nine - nishiwaki sayaka, :9nine - satake uki, 01fanfic : betrayed, :9nine - yoshii kanae, :9nine - kawashima umika, /nakajima yuto

Comments 25

columbin3 February 23 2011, 02:30:41 UTC

hahahaha!!!
I can't help smiling while reading this, seriously!!!
YAY!
I'm happy that Chii's doing something about it.
and Yuto getting excited about what Chii is doing. haha!
I can't wait how this story unfolds!!!

nice chapter!!!

ahh, I don't think the twist on my chapter was that awesome though. hehe!

tsubasa_quill February 23 2011, 11:51:07 UTC

yes your chapter was so awesome!!

^^

I'm glad this turned out okay :)

katrinalacson February 23 2011, 08:05:36 UTC

wow!!! gosh!!! you're great!!! The way you narrate the story is so detailed...Like, I can imagine it clearly...aw~,,,the story that's lame is mine~...T^T *sniff*
I love your story~...♥
I wonder how the next writer will continue this~...:) gosh!!! I'm so excited...:D

ah! Thank you for mentioning me here~...:D I appreciate that you appreciated my efforts~...>///<

I'm so happy that you're having fun...\^o^/
I hope you participate again~...:)

Thank you so much for your efforts too~...♥
It's well appreciated!!!:)
\^o^/

tsubasa_quill February 23 2011, 12:06:48 UTC

your story is not lame!!

I had fun reading it and i'm sure you had fun writing ^^

I'm excited on how it's going to be carried on from here too!!

katrinalacson February 24 2011, 02:52:58 UTC

thank you~...>///<

Me too~...I want to now how will the next writers continue this...:)
and how the last writer will end this...:)

keeconk February 23 2011, 08:51:37 UTC

Things somehow started to make sense here and it's nice that you narrated more on details.

Awesome. I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter. This thing is actually fun, isn't it? XD

tsubasa_quill February 23 2011, 11:58:43 UTC

me too!!!

haha...it sure is!! XD

(The comment has been removed)

tsubasa_quill February 23 2011, 12:07:12 UTC

i'm glad you do!!!

haha...me too XD

sewitches February 23 2011, 10:55:15 UTC

This was a nice one :) looking forward to the next ^^ and maybe when I read many of this I will participate too :D

tsubasa_quill February 23 2011, 12:07:40 UTC

you should!!

^^

It's fun!

sewitches February 23 2011, 15:13:55 UTC

I'm not that experienced in writing but maybe I will try in next fanfic :)

tsubasa_quill February 23 2011, 18:09:03 UTC

Gambateh!!!

^^