Betrayed page 3

[columbin3]

Writer: columbin3 
Main characters: Chinen Yuri and Murata Hirona
Guests: Nakajima Yuto, Kawashima Umika, Nishiwaki Sayaka, Yoshii Kanae, Satake Uki
Teaser: When karma pays back, the pain will going to be twice as much. Fortunately, karma is on Hirona's side for some good reason.

Comments

[m0m0kit]

Uwaah, first time commenting in this community *feels bad >.<*
I liked your chapter :) And I kind of feel the pairings changing xD
Yay for Yuto too :D I loved how you displayed him here :)
Nice chapter! :)

[columbin3]

kyaaa!!
thanks for reading!

hehe... I'm happy you liked it though my plot in here was decided in haste..
Hmm, let's see how the other authors will gonna handle it since according to the rule, the main pairing cannot be changed. hehe!!

thank you very much again!!!

[m0m0kit]

Oh, sometimes those plots who are decided hastily are the best xD
I thought only the main characters can't be changed, but the main pairing can? Don't know xD

Let's see how the other author's are going to handle it :D

[columbin3]

hahaha!
Really?! that's a nice phrase from you ne!~

ahh, main pairings can't change too.. I think.
hehe.

I think they're handling it properly ne.
The story is now getting really interesting.

[katrinalacson]

eh?! why did you say "I think it kinda turned into something weird. I'm sorry..."
You know what, you made it more exciting!!!
this betrayal is a big lie~...full of lies~...and karma is on its way...
I swear, I love your story!!! :D
You're great! The intro is also well written~...Love it~...!!!:D

I really appreciate your participation, effort and time~...:D
I hope you'll not leave this community, always have fun and continue writing~...:D
I will always understand you~...♥
Don't worry...:)

Thank you so much Maena-chan~♥ ♥ ♥

Pass your exams, ok?...:)

[columbin3]

oh, thank you very much for liking it!!
haha! yeah, that's why I immediately volunteered to write a chapter even though I'm busy because I love the plot and while reading the early chapters, an idea was popping on my mind...

I won't be leaving ne!~
I'll be following the community and participate when I have time. at least through here, I don't need to think of a plot of a whole story since it's just a chapter... really a good idea.

thanks. I really do hope I have passed those exams.
It's terribly nerve-wracking.

[katrinalacson]

You'll pass!!! :D

Thank you for all your efforts...:D
I can't say anything anymore that will show how I appreciate you~...:)

[anonymous]

hey! don't worry this chapter is really good! I enjoyed! I'm a Yuto fn too <3 the wy he acts in this chapter was cute and funny, well good work!
and I'm corious what happen next... it's a little complikated now, isn't it~?

[columbin3]

thank you very much!! (>_<)
hehe, I'm gad to meet a fellow Yuto-fan here...!
hai, complications really make it exciting ne!~

thank you for reading! ♥

[aemrith]

great job! it was worth the wait. this story is getting more and more interesting... no intriguing, actually. haha!
this chapter made me fall for Yuto. kawaii so. you really did a good job on portraying Yuto's cheerful personality.

as always, i'm wishing everybody in this story the best of luck! gambatte ne! :)

will be waiting for the next page. ja! ^_^

[columbin3]

waahh!
thank you very much!!!
hehe, I love portraying how cute Yuto can be too and I'm happy you liked it.

thank you for reading! ♥

[tsubasa_quill]

I love Yuto here! You portrayed him really well!!

oh my...this was a definitely surprising twist! Karma...nice idea!

This is kind of hard though...the pairings that is...you did a great job with this chapter!! I hope i don't spoil the story with mine :(

I'll do my best!

Once again! Loved the twist here!!

[columbin3]

waah!
thank you very much!

hehehe.. hai, I always believe in karma.
I'm giving the ball to you now ne!~
actually, I did that to see how others will handle the twist in the pairing. I really find it exciting...
I'll read yours soon.

thank you for reading! ♥