The Smallest Park with the Biggest Time Loop 4/4

[nutriyum_addict]

Title: The Smallest Park with the Biggest Time Loop (or 23 Times Leslie Knope Woke Up Alone and One Time She Didn't) 4/4
Pairing: Leslie/Ben
Rating: R

Comments

[c00kie]

Wow. This was so clever and cute! Of course it was Orin!

[nutriyum_addict]

Thank you so much! :)

[sullen_aquarian]

Love this! I'm a sucker for Season 4 angst, especially when it's really cute and funny with a happy ending. Love that Orin was behind it all along.

Wondering if that was Ron Dunn at the Bulge. The guy sounded like Sam Elliott : ).

[nutriyum_addict]

Thank you! And it was definitely Sam Elliott! Whether it was Ron Dunn or "the stranger" from The Big Lebowski--only Orin knows for sure. :)

[likeascience]

I LOVE THIS. I never thought there'd be such a different way to tell a story around this episode, but you definitely achieved that here. AND THE ENDING WAS SO GREAT I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT BUT IT MAKES TOTAL SENSE. Good, good!

[nutriyum_addict]

Thank you so much! It was a bit intimidating to try a Smallest Park fic because there's already so many AMAZING stories. I'm so glad this approach worked!

[liebfraumi]

My face made a chirping noise...The ending was more than perfect and your April is my favourite April ever, becaue you write her very true to character. Yoghurt surprises and garbage mochas...I guess you have a wicked sense of humor in real life...:-) Thank you for the story.

[nutriyum_addict]

Wow...Thank you so much! :)

[sunnyday678]

Orin! *cue maniacal, evil laugh*

Also this: "Orin: Thought about things."

This whole fic was perfect...bravo!

[nutriyum_addict]

Thanks! Orin is full of surprises. ;-)