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Apr 18, 2007 12:47

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nutmeg_poet April 19 2007, 06:36:02 UTC
thankee kindly; we are working on honesty.

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applequeen April 19 2007, 14:22:24 UTC
of labor days with little labor done. so juicy!

what nightmares come. not as juicy, but I don't know what I would prefer.

really though, wonderful work. when will you publish a little book of your favorites?

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applequeen April 21 2007, 22:17:15 UTC
probably this fall as my senior thesis.

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hebert April 20 2007, 19:30:21 UTC
this is quite good. mexcellent really. i'm a loser for not sending you a letter. i look forward to seeing you.

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hebert April 21 2007, 22:14:58 UTC
went to big sur with the missus for a day over spring break and we thought of you. there were some friendly deer quite close by on the trail and we spotted a shy rabbit making his rounds. on the way back, we thought we'd stop for a bite at a scenic restaurant overlooking the ocean, but they wanted $12 for nachos. so we got milkshakes in santa cruz instead.

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anonymous April 24 2007, 05:01:29 UTC
I like. My spoiled ear likes the rythm. Clever. Juicy. "The world's a marketplace" the "'s" there is a bit too heavy for my taste, but still I like.

The missus

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