Bet On Me Part 5

[numbuh_009]

Title: Bet On Me
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, YeWook
Part: 5
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: It's been years and Donghae is still struggling with the ghosts of his past.
A/N: Sequel to Bet On It

Comments

[tees2mai]

;_______________________________________; BUT HE CAME BACK. AND HE WANTED IT. AND THEN... WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME? WHY YOU BREAK MY HEART? OH GOD, WHY DID HE MOVE ON ;________________; WHY DID YOU LEAVE EUNHYUK, WHY NOW? WHY AFTER TEARING HIM APART? I'M JUST GOING TO SIT HERE AND WAIL RN.

[numbuh_009]

I am completely bowled over by your comment (and not just because of the big font). I don't even know how to reply properly, except that I am beyond flattered and somewhere along the lines of bouncing on my seat and squealing like the fangirl I am (and also, your comment may have reduced my spelling abilities to smithereens OTL). I actually hated my writing style for the longest time since I felt it wasn't descriptive enough so I'm really glad you like it! Thank you for your high praises and for your always epic reactions!

[tees2mai]

JSYK I can't spell for shit sometimes, my beta crycrys. LOL Also, you are the pigrabbit in the last gif and I creeperOCD man. I was trying to find a gif in which I was an evil dude on a chair smirking happily and you would be the cat in my lap which I would pet... but then that didn't fit in XD

/bounces with you (thats what she did). You're welcome! I don't think your style is lacking in anyway, it took me a long time to adjust and like the way I write because there are moments I look at my sentence and think, oh god, what was I thinking? But then, it's the way I express my words so I start to love it. :3 I felt that way about descriptions as well, but the thing is you describe the things revelavent to your stories and you do it well. Like I pictured the entire thing playing in my mind!

Hey! I was going to font size 75, but I thought I'd spare you lololol. ♥

[numbuh_009]

Thank goodness for spell check. Evil kitteh/pigrabbit *Purrs at you (or oinks or...hops?)* Bounce to you bounce to you~ I suppose it's sort of like getting use to your own skin and learning to love yourself (love your writing style too, BTW) :D My eyes thank you very much <3

[lovehyuk_suju]

haha~ you never fail to surprise me^^ *sighs* well...they're still broken but it's good that Donghae moved on...i liked this ending cuz it was ...well the end haha~

“Bet on me,” Donghae said in one last plea.

wah~~ my heart was beating so fast!!
it was almost like they wanted to be together but...well things just weren't meant to be
i don't think Hae will ever stop thinking about Eunhyuk either^^

again, i totally enjoyed this!! sooo much!!! please write more in the future!!!! <3
ooh right!! and i want some more chicken too~~~ XD

[numbuh_009]

Um, haha, surprise? Well, this ending is much happier than the other one, for Donghae at least. They do want so much to be together, but I guess the sad truth is that love does not always conquer all. And Eunhyuk will never stop thinking about Donghae either. Thank you for reading and here's a chicken (squawk)!

[catskilt]

I really enjoyed reading this series :) It was an interesting idea and a fun ride and I'm sorry to see it end, but looking forward to reading the side stories! Thank you for sharing this with us bb ♥

[numbuh_009]

You look forward to the side stories?...Hey look, a distraction! *runs away* Haha, I'll get to those...someday. Thank you so much for reading!

[catskilt]

Hahaha, I like this verse enough that I would love to dabble in it if I could, so there :)

[andytrack]

that is an unexpected ending.
Still...nice.
And donghae resisted eunhyuk.
That's new...

Write more neh?
I really like your stories.
Believe it or not, reading your fic helps me in my english exam.
Thanks. ^^

[numbuh_009]

Trust, it took a lot of willpower for Donghae to resist Eunhyuk. I will write more ^_^ I'm glad that my writing helped you in that aspect. Thank you for all your support!

[psych0chic27]

I will miss this series. It was written beautifully, even though they still remained broken. I really want them to end up together (I'm a sucker for happy endings) but I guess this will be the best decision for both of them, to move on with their lives separately. T___T

Please do write more *coughs unbroken!HaeHyuk coughs*, I really enjoyed reading your stories. Thank you so much! :)

[numbuh_009]

I too am a sucker for happy endings, but as hard as I tried to give them one in this verse, it just didn't fit. I will definitely write more EunHae (can't promise unbroken though; for some reason my brain has been going in that direction lately *kicks self*). Thank YOU so much for reading!