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numbuh_009

Bet On Me Part 3

Mar 15, 2011 16:58

Title: Bet On Me
Pairing: HaeHyuk
Minor Pairings: MinKyu, YeWook
Part: 3
Rating: R
Genre: romance, drama, angst
Disclaimer: I wish
Warnings: more than implied sex, language
Summary: It's been years and Donghae is still struggling with the ghosts of his past.
A/N: Sequel to Bet On It

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fanfiction, rating: r, fandom: super junior, pairing: haehyuk

Comments 79

zaboomafoo76 March 16 2011, 00:06:35 UTC

first of all...HOLY HELL HYUKJAE AND DONGHAE REUNITED!!!!

ahem. dude, Donghae kicks ass!!! and Hyukkie...i'm guess he's still pretty pissed at Donghae...

love love loved this chapter!! <333

zaboomafoo76 March 16 2011, 00:07:58 UTC

oh, and i loved this:

Donghae stared up at him, panting heavily. He thought about all the things he wanted to say, all the things he didn’t say but should’ve, all the things he could’ve said to make things right. The blood flowing from his head wasn’t doing much for his thought process, so he just stuck to the first thing that came to mind. “You look like shit,” he blurted out.

And Eunhyuk did. His hair was still flaming red, but brown roots were clearly starting to show. His skin was paler than Donghae remembered, but it wasn’t milky white, rather a sickly lack of color. There were dark circles under his eyes that weren’t there before.

Donghae didn’t think he had ever seen a more beautiful sight.

true love right there~ <333

numbuh_009 March 16 2011, 00:16:27 UTC

Reunion party! *throws confetti* Donghae kicks ass and Hyukjae kicks Donghae's ass. Haha, pissed is a bit of an understatement. You know what they say, beauty is in the eye of the lover (ex-lover? One true love? Soul mate?)! Thank you for commenting!

zaboomafoo76 March 16 2011, 00:18:12 UTC

ahhh i can't wait to see what happens with them next! ohh so exciting~!

thank you for writing it!!

lovehyuk_suju March 16 2011, 00:30:25 UTC

GAHHH~~~~~!!!! OMFG!!! HYUKKIE!!!!
...ouch that had to hurt...i guess Hyuk is holding a grudge too^^
i can see that it's already been quoted but i just wanted to add it anyway -> And Eunhyuk did. His hair was still flaming red, but brown roots were clearly starting to show. His skin was paler than Donghae remembered, but it wasn’t milky white, rather a sickly lack of color. There were dark circles under his eyes that weren’t there before.
Donghae didn’t think he had ever seen a more beautiful sight."

that was my favorite part <3

and then -> “Oh?” questioned Eunhyuk, noticing Donghae’s confusion. “You don’t have two broken ribs?” He stood up, brushing off his hands. “Shall we fix that?”
Donghae barely had time to register the words when he felt a powerful kick catch him square in his rib area.

pure genius^^
thanks so much for updating!! <33

numbuh_009 March 16 2011, 01:57:37 UTC

EUNHYUK! \o/ You can put it that way. OH YEAH! That's my favorite part too! Thanks so much for reading!

dhenia March 16 2011, 01:11:48 UTC

Kyaaa thx 4 updating..
Omo haehyuk reunited kyaaa
But didnt hyuk just kick hae at the ene? O.o

numbuh_009 March 16 2011, 01:58:45 UTC

Yup, kicked he kicked him ^_^ Thank you for the comment!

anchovcueen March 16 2011, 01:20:07 UTC

Wahh this fic is being more and more interesting,
Finally they meet again~ but with the still pissed off Hyukjae Lol..
Waiting for ypur next update bb XD

numbuh_009 March 16 2011, 01:59:14 UTC

Hyukjae can hold a mean grudge. Thank you for reading!

lulledbyscreams March 16 2011, 01:28:11 UTC

Gimme Spot!
I'll be back!!

lulledbyscreams March 16 2011, 15:22:53 UTC

REUNITED!!!!! GUDHJSNJFVBUAB !!! YESSSSS ( ... )

numbuh_009 March 16 2011, 21:29:18 UTC

It's alright! I love ridiculously long comments; they make me all fluffy inside. Eunhyuk likes having his dramatic entrances ^_^ Thanks for reading and commenting!