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And he finds himself in a twilight realm (Team Angst) Twilight

Feb 26, 2008 01:09

Title: And he finds himself in a twilit realm.
Author: Keenir
Proofreader: Fififolle.
Pairing/Characters: Charlie, Amita/Colby; Megan/Larry; Don; Sinclair;
OFC: Dr. Beylar.
Rating/Category: PG-13/Gen
Spoilers: Season 2, season 4 up to ‘Power’.
Summary: Charlie started the day with two firm pillars of certainty in his life: Amita, and math. He ( Read more... )

round 006, fic: angst

Comments 10

irena_adler February 26 2008, 07:26:48 UTC

Wonderful AU, very sad. *hopes Charlie gets zapped again*

delgaserasca February 26 2008, 11:28:54 UTC

What an interesting idea for an AU! Charlie's displacement is sad and affecting - definitely hit the angst rating! Good job.

elysium1996 February 27 2008, 00:56:45 UTC

Haunting and lovely look inuo AU

rodlox February 27 2008, 08:10:43 UTC

I appreciate this fb; thank you.

jlm110108 February 27 2008, 01:12:49 UTC

Awww. I agree with Irena -- I hope Charlie gets zapped back to his own universe again. Oh, the angst of being stuck in a universe away from the love of your life -- and having to see her with another guy.

Jo

jelsemium February 27 2008, 06:56:12 UTC

I really liked this idea. The idea of parallel universes has always fascinated me.

Poor Charlie, such a shock to him. (I wonder how the Charlie in the other world is dealing. Will he be able to deal with living with Amita or will he fumble the ball there, too?)

I'm definitely marking this in my memories list. My only problem is that is just doesn't feel like a Charlie/Amita story. And, sorry, I didn't feel like there was enough Larry/Megan, either.

rodlox February 27 2008, 08:10:18 UTC

thank you. same here.

most definately. (once he gets over the shock, he'll probably think he's died and gone to Heaven) ;)

thank you for marking it. and no need to apologize - I understand, and apologize for that.
(fic-wise, the only angst I've ever written was Cutler angst in Hoshi/Malcolm stories in Enterprise fandom); but this was still fun, and I'm pleased I got to take part.

rodlox March 6 2008, 04:37:26 UTC

if I may ask, would this qualify for admission to the Amita community?
if not, no problem.

ps: again, thank you.

jelsemium March 6 2008, 07:14:00 UTC

Absolutely! Any story that Amita has a significant role in fits. It doesn't have to be Amita/Charlie.

You're welcome for the compliments and thanks for thinking of my comm! :-D