FIC: Sometimes it Feels Just Like I'm Falling, for Rodlox

[swingandswirl]

Title: Sometimes it Feels Just Like I'm Falling
Recipient: Rodlox
Pairing: Liz/Amita
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Summary: Amita finally gives her an honest, happy smile that makes Liz feel kind of warm inside.
Author's Note: Slight AU from canon; in this 'verse, Amita and Charlie never dated.

Comments

[lilacs_roses]

Nicely done :)

I've not read many femslash stories, either fanfic or otherwise because the ones I've read just didn't... I don't know if they were just written poorly or if it's a subject that I'm really uncomfortable/skidish about, but I enjoyed this one. While I find the female form to be very beautiful, I've never seriously contemplated anything more than really great hugs from very close female friends.

I think I liked this story more than most because it wasn't heavy; comfortable and appealing.

Again, nicely done :)

[olivia_j]

I love this so much! Just the slow build of it, all layered and subtle, the way they gradually become more and more intimate. And so many gorgeous little details. /happy sigh/ Really beautiful. :)

[morte206]

Just lovely.
A wonderful bedtime story upon which to build dreams.
Thank you for sharing.

[dizzydrea]

This was lovely! I'm not usually into femslash, but I found this slow-build story to be sweet and full of promise. Well done!

[rodlox]

*dances happily*
thank you for writing and sharing this! I'll most definately be back to re-read this a few more times.

>"It's Hawaiian," she tells her. "It means, 'towards the water.' Like if you were directing someone somewhere, you would tell them it's makai, toward the water, or mauka, towards the mountain."
!!!

loving the tenderness and the hotness alike in this, as well as the comforableness they share. bravo!

[sororcula]

lol since it's been literally a year since i wrote this it's probably about time i revealed~ that it was me (though you probably could've guessed, haha!) wanted to say thanks and i'm glad you liked it. :-)