FIC: How Ian Edgerton's Bad Day Got Better... Eventually, for CerealKiller0

[swingandswirl]

Recipient: cerealkiller0
Author: TBA
Disclaimer: I do not make any money from this work of fiction. Nor do I own, or have any claim to, any recognisable characters and locations found within this story. I do own what little plot there is, along with the original character, though.

Title: How Ian Edgerton’s Bad Day Got Better… Eventually
Pairing: Ian Edgerton

Comments

[damerel]

Um, I'm supposed to comment sensibly after that????

I'm not sure I can, but I'll try... First thing to say, poor old Brian Burrows. *pets him* He seems like such a good guy, and I can relate all too well to his reaction to Colby.

So it broke his heart even further when the next thing Colby said was, “You guys started without me?”Heeeee! Now *that* I was not expecting! There was so much humour in this, especially with Ian's long-suffering reflections on coping with Don and Colby. It is so Ian to be completely upfront and not putting up with their crap any longer, and I love the way that the swift clash and subsequent escalation - so right for their personalities and after a stressful situation when they're also tired - is equally swiftly solved

[lilacs_roses]

Uh... uh... yeah, I'm just gonna "ditto" Damerel, she's got it pretty covered :D

ROFL.

However, I looked at Don and Colby being the Diva's and not Ian but then again, maybe I don't know, exactly, what a diva is /shrug.

Well done!!!

[dizzydrea]

Yeah, my mind successfully imploded after reading that, so my comments will be brief until I can find my brain again. Suffice it to say it was hot and sweet and just so very them. Nicely done!