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lizzy61 June 29 2011, 14:45:37 UTC
Very nice! I would look forward to reading more if you do decide to turn it into a longer story.

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nukichou June 30 2011, 05:27:42 UTC
Thank you! I will certainly try my best to come up with something more. ^_^

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evil_whimsey June 29 2011, 17:56:09 UTC
Yeah.

Those last two lines nail so much of what I see whenever Doumeki actually steps up and acts, on Watanuki's behalf. They also make for an awesome fic summary. I'd be very interested to see how the final line in particular would play out, in a story.

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nukichou June 30 2011, 05:34:13 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm definitely going to get to work on this as soon as possible. :) Just have to get my butt into gear for finishing all the other ideas I've started, haha..

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nukichou June 30 2011, 05:34:37 UTC
I'm so glad you think so! Thank you!

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ekaterin24 July 3 2011, 19:39:51 UTC
Ooh, I like this! It's wonderful as it is, but if a larger story grows, I'd be glad to read it.

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narutos_lover August 8 2011, 19:08:02 UTC

<3 love it!

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