Fic: Bulletproof... I Wish I Was (Jensen/Jared) NC-17

Jul 26, 2008 15:10

This is new for me, playing in someone else's sandpit.

Fic title: Bulletproof... I Wish I Was
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1258
Summary: Jensen has things to do.
Notes: thenyxie asked me for a Jensen POV to accompany her amazing AU But Then My Homework Was Never Quite Like This where Jensen is Jared's high school physics teacher. ( Read more... )

j2, jensen/jared, fic, rps

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thenyxie July 26 2008, 03:23:17 UTC
God honey, you already know how much I LOVE THIS. It's SO Jensen. And I love how you get at the emotion of him clearly and perfectly without ever once going too deep or overdoing it. He's SOOOOO obsessed, just as as obsessed as Jared. It breaks my heart how he wanted to ask Jared to stay. He's so vulnerable here, so fucking SAD, letting himself want like this, just this once (though I suspect it will happen again, Jensen--just this once never works out ;) I love how he washes the cutting board till his hands ache. And the image of Jared lowering himself down on Jensen just GUH. Jesus fuck that's hot.

And you're damned right he's never met anyone like Jared in his life *G*

Thank you SO much for writing this for me! It is so fantastic, and I hope you'll do another one some time! :)

Love you, sweetie! *SMISHES*

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nu_breed July 26 2008, 20:45:31 UTC
Aw, honey. You know that I wrote this for YOU and as long as you felt that I did your Jensen some justice, that's really all that matters.

Consider this fic a thank-you for creating such an incredible story that has consumed me so completely that I haven't been able to think of anything else!

I have to admit, I am hooked on this Jensen and would really love to take a crack at him again. What can I say? Broken!Jensen just speaks to me.

And the image of Jared lowering himself down on Jensen just GUH. Jesus fuck that's hot.

Mmmm it's a lovely image, isn't it? Consider that inspiration ;)

Thanks for letting me know you liked it, honey, that means the world to me.

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fromyourashes July 26 2008, 04:14:07 UTC
Ok, I am SO glad this was written after part six, because if I'd read this in the - words like chronological are not working properly, so forget it, lmao. All I'm trying to say is, OH, GOD, POOR JENSEN, and THANK GOODNESS I READ PART SIX.

This fits in beautifully.

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nu_breed July 26 2008, 20:46:31 UTC
Thank you so much!

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softbluebuddy July 26 2008, 04:57:36 UTC
Perfect for Jensen's POV. Great companion piece for this fic.

He isn't used to feeling like this, and he doesn't like it. Can't let it continue, needs to stamp it out. But then he closes his eyes and sees those too-long bangs and that trusting face, and those legs that go on forever, and he's fucking gone again.

Poor Jensen. It was a rocky ride, but the way you describe how he feels right there, he never had a chance.

Nicely done. ♥

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nu_breed July 26 2008, 20:47:37 UTC
Aw, that's awesome you think so. I'm glad that you felt Jensen was true to thenyxie's vision.

Thanks for letting me know.

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certainthings July 26 2008, 05:38:56 UTC
Your Jensen is wonderful. This was brilliant.

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nu_breed July 26 2008, 20:48:29 UTC
Thank you so much. I just borrowed him for a bit, so I'm glad you enjoyed my take on him. :)

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tabularassa July 26 2008, 06:57:19 UTC
Your rocked this. Absolutely perfect and oh how I feel for Jensen. Poor baby.

Did I mention hot? Cos you ALWAYS make hot happen. ♥

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nu_breed July 26 2008, 20:49:46 UTC
Thank you SO much, that's wonderful to hear.

And I very rarely think my fic is ever hot enough, so that's lovely to hear. ♥

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tabularassa July 27 2008, 06:37:13 UTC
Hot like fire, baby;)

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