Remind Me (part 1, chapter 5)

Aug 28, 2009 20:20

Chapter 5 - The Long Awaited

Yoochun decides that they should keep their new friendship a secret.

"We're friends.  But me and the You that actually belongs here, aren't.  Hyung, this is for the best.  I don’t think it’s a good idea to make anyone else suspicious that you're, you know, not really you."

Jaejoong’s argument is mostly just to pout and ( Read more... )

yoosu, chaptered, yunjae, romance, au, remind me

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:) inoueai_26 August 30 2009, 02:33:48 UTC
I've been a silent reader so far, but I really want to say that these parts are FAR from boring. :) I really enjoy your story and can't wait for chapter 6!

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Re: :) nspirem33p September 2 2009, 08:15:32 UTC
Thank you so much XDDDDD

I guess they're just boring to me, because I want to get to other parts already, but I have to write these first in order to go there. This is my first attempt at a chaptered fic and I gotta say, it's REALLY frustrating.

But I'm so glad you like it =) Chapter 6 should be up soon!

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synce18 August 30 2009, 04:18:22 UTC
I really really like this - the way the story's building up is just right. ^^ Jaejoong bringing the five of them together even if they're in an alternate world. And even if they're different, they're still the same. I am looking forward to where this is going. I'm also curious as to how the real DBSK is dealing in their own world with their Jaejoong gone or if he was replaced with the mean Jaejoong, LOL.

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nspirem33p September 2 2009, 08:26:35 UTC
And even if they're different, they're still the same.

I'm so glad you wrote that, because that's exactly the theme I was going for with this whole fic...yay!!! *glomps you*

As for the REAL DBSK, a lot of people have been wondering about them too. I'm sort of debating if I should give everyone a hint as to what's happening with them, though it's not quite as dramatic as everyone seems to think...I hope that's a good thing. ;D

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narisa_rei August 30 2009, 07:06:30 UTC
awhh.. i'm so happy that u updated 2 chapters in one go.
i'm very curious about this story..
glad that YooMin already opened up to Jaejoong.
that's what Jaejoong needs right now, or else he'll go crazy at the lack of warmth..

hope that JJ could bring HoSu to be HIS HoSu soon..

and i just have to mention..
"Oh My God, Sun!!" is just... EPIC!!
LOL!!! *pinch Su's cheek*

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nspirem33p September 2 2009, 08:31:44 UTC
I was watching AADBSK3 while I was editing this and I just had to throw that in there (LURVS SU <3333333)

And JJ's finally going to spend some time with Yunho in the next chapter, so he'll be one step closer to bringing the five of them back together soon.

TVXQ, fighting!!!

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haru_ran August 30 2009, 13:24:37 UTC
Spotti~ x3

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haru_ran August 30 2009, 16:06:02 UTC
Aw~ how sad. D:
I hope Jaejoongie will be able to hug Junsu soon. >////<
Waaah~ Yunho is so mean to my poor little Joongie. How come the Jaejoong-shi in this world is so hated? I'm really curious. o.o

Jaejoong amuses himself by yelling out random things like, "Oh, my god, sun!" and "long time no see" (thank you, Junsu)
*bwahahahahahaha* Omo! You watched AADBSK 3~ xDDDDDD

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nspirem33p September 2 2009, 09:32:54 UTC
I did watch AADBSK3 and I LLLOOOVVEEEDD it <3333333 Junsu is the cutest man in the world!!!

Don't worry, Yunho won't stay mad at Joongie for long, and chapter 8 will finally reveal what exactly Jaejoong did to make Yunho so upset with him. *dun, dun, dun*

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haru_ran September 3 2009, 08:57:21 UTC
*haha* I just watched The Saipan Story till now, 'cause I wnat to watch it together with my flatmate later when I'm back home. xD
But~ I'm sooo happy that it has English subtitles~ >//////<
*hehe* Yeah, he is. But! Jae is just as cute and clumsy and lovely and just dorky! xDDDD

Ah~ I see. Can't wait then. Oh? What? Did he kiss someone else? o.o
*hahahaha*gets bricked*
Anyway, will wait for you awesome stories~ x3

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orionsroad August 30 2009, 14:04:44 UTC
Hi hi hi! I just started reading this, and I love it. :) I think every fandom that I've ever read fanfics in has had one of these multi-universe travelling fics in them and I'm pleased as punch that someone is writing one for DBSK. And with the added most squeal-worthy bonus that it's Yunjae and from Jae's persepective - for optimal reading pleasure!

You're doing a really good job too, the school-verse is really interesting and it's nice that there's the twist that other-Jaejoong is a bit of a dick.

I'm very much looking forward to reading more! :D

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nspirem33p September 2 2009, 09:25:03 UTC
Holy Yunjae on a stick!!! Is it my birthday???

When I first discovered DBSK fandom, you were one of the first authors I ever read and I LOVE your fics (On The Other Side of You, still among my top 10)!!

*squeals like the fangirl I am...kyah!!!!!*

Thank you so much for your encouraging comment and liking this fic XDDDD

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