Comments | nsp_ficathon: Around the Clouds, angst prompt, PG

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Around the Clouds, angst prompt, PG

Apr 25, 2008 02:06

Title: Around the Clouds
Author: dirty_diana
Prompt: angst
Pairing: Mal/Zoe
Rating: PG
Warnings: none.
Summary: Zoe can't sleep. Takes place after the BDM.

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( Time came, after it was all over, that Zoe opened her eyes, looked around, and found she was still breathing. )

Comments 17

sparky77 April 28 2008, 05:04:30 UTC

And now I'm going to cry... that was lovely :)

dirty_diana May 7 2008, 15:45:50 UTC

Thank you, but please don't cry. :)

skripka April 30 2008, 03:04:51 UTC

very very very very ouch, and very very very very very beautiful.

dirty_diana May 7 2008, 15:45:02 UTC

thanks very very very much. :)

inalasahl June 1 2008, 00:48:47 UTC

"Best to be going forward, then," the captain tells her.
Oh, wow. Slay. Me. Dead. Great fic!

musesfool June 1 2008, 01:10:52 UTC

This is heartbreaking. Oh, Zoe.

the_summoning_d June 1 2008, 01:38:15 UTC

Oh, that was beautiful and absolutely heartbreaking.

"Best to be going forward, then,"
That in particular I can just hear Mal saying. Your characterisations are absolutely perfect.

Plus Jayne leaving when Kaylee does makes my Jaylee-shippin' little heart sing ^^