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Feb 14, 2011 16:13

“ PUSH!” Arthur was running through the corridor, helpless…followed by Lancelot, they met Gwaine outside the room, his whole body was shaking “there!” he said to them , they entered and find Gwen lying on the bed , she turned around to see Arthur and then smiled “I was waiting for you…”

“Always trying to put a brave face on everything, god I ( Read more... )

merlin, gwen, arthur, morgana, lancelot

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babybee61 February 14 2011, 17:09:21 UTC
I LOVE IT!!

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nsk1 February 15 2011, 09:21:27 UTC
THANKS U!!

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forgetregret009 February 14 2011, 17:57:39 UTC
Other than a few typos and grammar mistakes... It was really lovely written :)

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nsk1 February 15 2011, 09:21:14 UTC
thanks u!! im going to work on my grammar lol
does that part 1 make u want to read the rest?

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osept February 14 2011, 18:10:06 UTC
it is so nice.

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nsk1 February 15 2011, 09:20:09 UTC
thanks!

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vaberella February 15 2011, 01:35:58 UTC
This is a great start. I'd like to see where this story goes. Fate can be changed. Fate has many players and many choices that help to realize a particular destiny. We don't know if Gwen's destiny is to live or die...but we can rest assured that with the involvement of Merlin and Morgana---they might actually cause it to become an actuality. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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nsk1 February 15 2011, 09:19:42 UTC
oh thanks u so much! yeah i agree!! in my story merlin and morgana think that they can change gwen's destiny both for different reason but still as the great dragon said they are kinda "bonded" with each other ,
im working on the second part and i love surprises lol

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nsk1 February 19 2011, 19:03:27 UTC
btw the ive written the part 2 if u want to check it out!<3

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ellabellamj February 15 2011, 18:31:16 UTC
I really enjoyed that. You had me worried when Gwen died but then it was all a dream. Look forward to your next chapter as this story looks very promising, well done.

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nsk1 February 17 2011, 13:03:08 UTC
thanks!! gwen is the the real center of attention in my story cause ive always find weird that the writors dont use all her potential...i mean she is the once and future queen for god's sake!

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nsk1 February 19 2011, 19:04:13 UTC
ive written the part 2 if u want to check it out!<33

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