Comments | nsahdmdto: Firefly AU Fic: Family Unit

nsahdmdto

Firefly AU Fic: Family Unit

Oct 13, 2006 04:13

Title: Family Unit

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: *sigh* No matter how often I try to kidnap them and tie them up in my closet they aren’t mine . . . except for Reginald (I think . . .)

Summary: (just a little ficlet set in

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fic, firefly, rayne

Comments 9

curi_o October 13 2006, 17:12:33 UTC

Am I allowed to love this? Because I do. I really, really do. In a completely fluffy giggle warm-fire kind of way.

And the Simon ending. Well, you knew it was just perfect, didn't you? Of course you did.

My only qualm is that sometimes the personal pronouns get mixed up... and Jayne becomes a she. I think Jayne might take offense to being called a she, though I would think that was silly, because there is nothing shameful about being referred to in the feminine.

nsahdmdto October 13 2006, 22:44:59 UTC

I certainly hope you're allowed to love it. I kinda like to snuggle it. Sorry about the pronoun confusion. It was 3 AM so I just ran the Word spelling/grammar check and went with it. Still, I hope that didn't interfere too much.

angel932 October 13 2006, 23:28:41 UTC

Ahhh, Were!Jayne.... how I adore him! This incarnation of our favorite couple continues to be irresistible, no matter who is actually authoring the stories. Bravo!

nsahdmdto October 13 2006, 23:55:41 UTC

Hee hee hee!

I totally understand about Were!Jayne. When it comes down to it, it's not that big a leap to go from Jayne to Were!Jayne, and we all know how irresistable Jayne is.

Thanks for reading!

fairandbright October 14 2006, 05:12:10 UTC

EEEEE! That was so adorable! He got her a present! And there were flowers! And they have a wolf cub! *gushes, flails, and dies*

nsahdmdto October 14 2006, 20:58:37 UTC

Yay! I like gushing. I felt a need for fluffy fluff :)

Flailing can be good too.

HOwever, no dying! *Shoves in half-naked Were!Jayne clone to do CPR* (Hey, even if it doesn't work, it's a dang good way to go)

fairandbright October 15 2006, 03:10:01 UTC

Only half-naked? *pouts* I was hoping for the full Monty.

*dies until a fully naked were!Jayne is brought before me*

nsahdmdto October 16 2006, 04:38:37 UTC

There, there, dear. Don't pout (can you do that and die at the same time?). Just think, if you don't die, you can undress the half-naked were!Jayne clone to make him a fully naked Were!Jayne clone. Um, er, *looks inspired* besides, they only come in dressed or half-naked *shoves naked Were!Jayne clone in closet. Uh huh, yeah, that's it.

bugchicklv February 24 2007, 01:00:33 UTC

Might as well give him some pansy name like Simon.

*snort*

OMG so VERY Jayne. I loved it.