[Fanfic] Dear Diary.... Pg 3

[npriya]

Title: Dear Diary....
Author: npriya
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Romantic, Angst,Fluff
Length: 3/?
Rating: NC-13, for the time being XD
Disclaimer: Well I Own the story and the characters belong to themselves!!! 
Summary: "Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control”

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Comments

[donud]

spot! it's been a long time! brb read!

[donud]

Aigooooo why so angst bb ahhh... What happened with Mrs. Jung?? T____T

So, YunHo and JaeJoong just separated like that? And YooSu too? Huhuhuuu

Update soon neeeee

[npriya]

well lets see what happens later ne!! i will try to post as soon as possible but my health is keeping me from doing it. but i will definitely continue the story.... XD

[snow_meow]

Interesting.

I wonder what happen to Mrs Jung.

Your need to do something about spacing.
Your paragraphs are too long.

In addition, there is no space between the lines above and below.
It makes it really difficult to read your fic.

I cannot wait to read more.

[npriya]

sorry abt the spacing i didnt have much time editing it. will try to space them properly. thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! XD

[npriya]

why are you spamming my post????

[phinea2009]

Yunjae's separation is hard to swallow. I hope they'll be reunited when they are older.