I- hmmm. This is not a bad app, really, but I could not follow along with the background much at all- it's not very accessible to someone who doesn't know the canon. The abilities section also doesn't explain much (wtf is a Purify Weird Soul? What are the Valkyrie's abilities beyond flight?), so if the canon is accurate, I would still request expanded abilities, personally.
I agree with Shuri. It's a bit hard to follow, but if Ami can verify that it's not wrong, then I'm fine with it. I'd also like more info on the abilities as well.
Oh jeez, I have friends over and participate in a floor move at work and there's a Lenneth app waiting. Pardon me while I take a moment to shriek in delight
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After reviewing your application, we would like more information about some of Lenneth's abilities which were omitted- specifically, her ability to make crystals and about Soul Materialize.
Please feel free to submit these revisions and we will continue processing your application, and if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask a moderator or helpstaffer!
/smacks the internet to get it working Taichi Kamiya styleflenceburgsbestJune 10 2011, 22:33:46 UTC
It covers what we need, but I'd probably also note that the Nibelung Valesti could use a little more meat, too. Let's see...
Dear Casper,
Thank you for your patience! After reviewing your application, we would like more information on one of Lenneth's abilities, her Nibelung Valesti. We would also like information about a couple of abilities which were omitted- specifically, her ability to make crystals and her Soul Materialize.
Please feel free to submit these revisions and we will continue processing your application. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask a moderator or helpstaffer!
Hugs and Kisses, Marky Mark and the Funky Bunch I don't even know
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Dear Casper,
After reviewing your application, we would like more information about some of Lenneth's abilities which were omitted- specifically, her ability to make crystals and about Soul Materialize.
Please feel free to submit these revisions and we will continue processing your application, and if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask a moderator or helpstaffer!
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Dear Casper,
Thank you for your patience! After reviewing your application, we would like more information on one of Lenneth's abilities, her Nibelung Valesti. We would also like information about a couple of abilities which were omitted- specifically, her ability to make crystals and her Soul Materialize.
Please feel free to submit these revisions and we will continue processing your application. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask a moderator or helpstaffer!
Hugs and Kisses,
Marky Mark and the Funky Bunch I don't even know
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